Clash of Rimoon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

I started writing a battle scene and i actually turned to really liking it. With that being said i apologize for any errors in the battle or novice writing as i always hope to improve.

A young child named Talamari was one day captured from his home in Rimoon by a unknown man wearing a exotic mask. Soon after the abduction, the man began hosting experiments on the child in order to ensure his success of harboring a forsaken demon inside the boy's soul. Seeming less sadistic the man showed no emotion and told Talamari that he is only doing what was necessary for the survival of mankind. The first few days of being taken from his family he proved resistant. However as months passed and no one coming to his aid he soon turned broken.

After 3 months the experiment was complete with Talamari harboring a new forsaken demon. Forcing Talamari to invade his own home, the man hoped this would not only strengthen the demon but break any connections from Talamari. The boy could barley fell his body as the demon took control of assaulting Rimoon.

Clash of Rimoon


Forcefully united with a demon, Talamari’s body fully converted as his skin turned into a hardened dark green with large black holes, he felt unrelenting energy. Rushing towards the wall with tremendous speed many of the guards looked in confusion seeing a child charge the wall. Nearby demons seeing a great opportunity watched for the stone to break.

 Manically charging to the wall he unleashed a punch that nearly instantly shattered the wall. The guards shaking from the devastating strike nearly fell off the wall but for sure knew they couldn’t let the cursed boy into the city. The Elite Guards was the first to jump from the wall and engage Talamari. Wearing relatively heavy armor a group of 4 elite guards landed crashing to the ground swords first.

Seeing them fall from the wall in preparation to fight Talamari was overjoyed. He could see there will to slay him but knew it would all be in vain. Making a huge back leap from the wall before the as the guards landed, he made a disturbing laugh. Hearing the huge city alarm go off he enjoyed the thought of how much panic can be happening inside the city.

Despite wearing heavy armor the guards were quick and somewhat nimble. 2 rushed towards Talamari as he moved his tongue around his lips. Getting in close range one of the elite guards thrusted his longsword aimed at Talamari. Easily dodging the strike Talamari made a quick and dominant punch to the guard’s stomach making his armor useless. Entirely penetrating his armor he could no longer see his arm as it was inside the guard’s stomach. However the guard was very much still alive and far from dead.  Releasing a thunderous shout of light Talamari flew back as the front of his body was on fire. Landing swiftly on his feet the fire soon dissipated from his body.

Looking at the wounded guard Talamari couldn’t help but to laugh at him. A second guard slipped past Talamari as he tried to make a deep pierce with his longsword forged in light. The second guard had less armor but was still strong and he could move very quickly. Unable to react in time the sword penetrated through Talamari’s back. The holy sword did little damage even though it scorched his soul as well as his body. Only annoying him as he locked the sword into his back.

Incapable of pulling his sword out, the guard focused his energy Teleporting back to the first guard, slight distance away from Talamari.  As Talamari drew the sword from his back and the fire quickly departed from his body, he smiled. Looking at another pair of 2 elite guards, he noticed they were charging a type of light orb in the far distance. As the 2 guards in front of Talamari engaged him, he decided he should deal with them quickly before the orb charges. Talamari was actually somewhat disappointed as he spoke in a twisted voice. “As fun as it would be, I regret we won’t have time to play anymore” 

Corrupting the sword it appeared as a green energy as he threw it like a whirlwind into one of the guards that charged towards him. No time left to counter it made a clean cut through the throat of the already wounded elite guard. Decapitating the guard his head warped in his helmet rolled on the floor steadily oozing blood. As the rest of the elite guards used a type of Telepathy to talk to each other, he disengaged Talamari.

Talamari, looking at the elite guard’s far in the distant back, already saw an enormous orb of light rushing to him.

The 2 Elite guards in the distance finally gained enough energy to launch an enormous orb of light. Talamari leaped into the air as gigantic sphere past under him. Still controlling the massive sphere the Elite guards manipulated and guided it near Talamari. The demon inside Talamari was unsure if the body could truly survive such energy and launched his own sphere of dark energy into the light.

The ball of dark energy was smaller but managed to disrupt the large holy orb making it unexpectedly explode in front of him. With a devastating explosion Talamari fell from the sky with both his arms severely burned as he tried to block the blast. Knowing demons can be relentless an Elite guard flew into the air with a large great sword.

Connecting his sword into Talamari’s ribs, he was slammed down into the ground unharmed while several of bones inside Talamari were cracked and destroyed. Throwing up blood, Talamari could barely move. He began to get very tired of the guards and the demon cannot understand the thought of losing. Unleashing a devastating piercing screech. The Elite guard on top of him collapsed to the ground bleeding through his ears. Completely disoriented the guard’s soul sundered at the bestial voice.

Greatly injured Talamari grabbed the Elite guard by his head and opened his mouth slowly swallowing his soul. With the other Elite guards to exhausted and to distant to help they guarded the gate as they felt more entities approaching. After eating the Guards soul he was completely healed but also knew one soul was far from enough. The demon inside Talamari laughed and cried after tasting the soul of someone so powerful.

Approaching from the distance was nearby demons encouraged that Talamari could break down the nations already partly shattered wall. A demonic behemoth slowly appeared in sight of the wall. A new soul however stood in the way of their feast, Hernioun nicknamed the Angel of Rimoon. Seeing more and more demons crawling and screaming towards the wall he also noticed his decapitated and dead guards.

The civilians of Rimoon seeing Hernioun on the wall knew something was greatly wrong. Wearing a striking white cloak and a bright yellow blade just his mere presence aggravated the demons. Focusing his energy he emitted a powerful light inside his soul. His eyes shined and his blade flourished.

Gracefully landing outside the wall he saw smaller demons tearing the elite guard’s armor eating his corpse. All the guards, strong or weak rushed outside knowing they couldn’t let them into the city and knew they couldn’t fail with Hernioun.

He spoke with a passionate yet strong voice

“Come my guardians, our nation shall not go into descent”

“We will not let this purge consume us, so today we fight for our home and everyone we love”

“Just as I won’t let your families die I will not allow my children to be eaten, so we must send these fallen spirits back to their void!”


Without another word the front of the wall quickly turned into a small warzone. The demonic behemoth was just as strong if not stronger then he looked. Smashing the ground in front of him a cavern formed from below, killing many novice guards. Hernioun drew his sword as he blitz into the battlefield surrounded in light. Seeing him target the behemoth, Talamari leaped in front of him with and prepared to make a blood thirsty slash of his claws.

 Hernioun saw Talamari’s broken soul through his eyes and felt pity seeing the truth. Redirecting Talamari’s arm he made a swift stab to his stomach, before making a powerful kick in his chest to draw space. However Talamari clenched the ground breaking the earth that his arms ploughed through.

Hernioun looked at the behemoth making ruin to any knights in its way but couldn’t escape Talamari. Hernioun braced himself as Talamari charged at him with godlike speed. Clashing with the Angel of Rimoon, Talamari found an opening. Making a brutal jab into the Hernioun’s shoulder, his right arm was disabled. Talamari felling the blood on his hand from the wound of Hernioun tried to make a very hasty decapitation.

Seeing Talamari’s arm swing towards his neck like a blade it was unsteady as Hernioun took advantage of that quick flaw. Switching his sword to his left hand, Hernioun tried the best he could with his opposite hand. Ducking under the deadly slash he made an upward slice, making an unclean cut of Talamari’s left arm and nearly cutting it off. Talamari’s left arm was mangled and barley attached being only left on by one think thread of skin.  

Within seconds Talamari’s arm healed as if it never happened. Hernioun knew he had to fight with his arm still disabled and if he left to make a quick heal, it would take far too long. As Hernioun tried to come up with a plan Talamari chuckled and said “Due to my benevolence will give you 5 seconds to decide your next exploit.”

Hernioun was unsure if Talamari was joking but took the quickly took the offer. Sitting down eyes closed, legs crossed and his hands on his lap as he began to take deep breaths. Time was up when Talamari warned him as he continued to sit down with his eyes closed, it felt as if nothing changed. He stood up much more relaxed but his right arm was still fractured. Seeing Hernioun’s face so calm as if he wasn’t going to die, slightly annoyed him.

Talamari told him now that he’s done his resolution, he should make the first move. Holding his blade in his left hand he released his eyes upon Talamari. Bolting towards him Talamari was happy to be able to break him again. As soon as Hernioun got within range Talamari jumped towards him, swinging his arm downwards like sharp mace. Dodging to the left of the wild swing Hernioun emitted a flash disorienting Talamari and burning the inside of his eyes.

The sudden yet powerful flash was far brighter than anything the demon saw. His eyes burned as he screeched in agony and rage. Hernioun still didn’t want to hurt Talamari as he saw past the demons illusion but had no choice. Hernioun’s eyes began to glow as he pulled out his blade and flashed around the blinded demon. Moving around Talamari with unnatural speed his blade pierced Talamari’s back instantly breaking his vertebrae and severing his spine.

 Almost completely paralyzed Talamari could not move just as he was no longer to feel any pain in his body. He also felt no heat and was unable to sense Hernioun’s position due to his disconnected spine. Flashing around him, Talamari was slashed continuously and unable to fall due to Hernioun’s speed. Finding it hard to breathe the demon was still unsure how much damage the body could take as he felt his grip weakening on Talamari. Hernioun ended the dance by making a deep jab into Talamari’s stomach, rupturing the custodial of the demon inside Talamari. With the cage broken the demon was close to being permanently released from Talamari’s body.

In a final attempt to stay dormant into the child’s soul the demon’s arm broke through the back of Talamari. The demon was still extremely powerful in its premature form as it grabbed Hernioun’s arm. Looking as a bloody twisted humanoid it bore 5 eyes, half of one wing, no mouth and a tail void of skin with multiple smaller eyes soon to cover the developing tail. The eyes on the creatures distorted face was near invisible with the overflow of blood pouring onto the demons head. The dead wing barely structured on its back looked destroyed. Only one of 3 out of the tails was fully developed in length, being 5 feet long with 4 bleeding warped eyes. The other two smaller tails appeared as just bone about to rip from the demons skin.

Pulling him closer the demons grip was so cold and drained of life putting him into a near instant paralysis. The demon stared into Hernioun with 5 of its eyes and a vile passion before fully emerging from Talamari’s back. Standing 8 feet tall it’s still large blood soaked tail rapidly rushed to Hernioun seeking to impale him. Snapping out of shock Hernioun jumped back forcing out all fear and anxiety. Talamari feel to the ground neighboring death with the demon completely external from his body.

Clinging to life, Talamari regained some conscious and was able to stare into the blood snared sky, feeling no pain. With a risky change of leaving the boy’s body the demon pondered if he should finish this quickly as a dead vessel would be useless. As the demon whipped its skinless bulky tail, Hernioun noticed the eyes on the limb staring at him. Feeling the creature’s immense aura, fear tried to upsurge inside him.

Though he fought demons before, there was something different about this one besides its great power. Facing Hernioun with an odious desire the demon hastened to plague his light. Erupting the ground beneath him, the demon charged looking to cleave him. Regaining focus as Hernioun looked forward he saw a small broken wing on the beast’s back and was already by his face. Using his sword for a quick block it was immediately crushed. Trying to regain space and think, the demon wrapped his leg with his tail. Preventing his movement.

Grabbing Hernioun by his face he was brutally slammed into the ground nearly fracturing his skull as pieces of rock below him flew in spite. The demon grabbed Hernioun’s head as he lifted him up to look into him. All 5 eyes rested on Hernioun staring into his soul. Fear broke free inside him with the demons frozen and strong grip. The demon did not laugh, instead he asked a question.

“You fight me as if the boy was your child, but where is that will now?”

Throwing him to the distance the demon bellowed.


Hernioun spit out blood when his back was shattered by the force of the demon and the earth. The damage ruptured a most of his organs causing severe internal bleeding. Just as Talamari, Hernioun looked into the sky unsure if he was going to die. Snapping out of his defeat, he stood up despite the internal hemorrhage in his chest and back. Barley able to stand he looked at the city walls, destroyed and fallen. Knowing how many of his people are fighting for their life just like him, he knew he couldn’t let the monster win and let them down, including his family. Falling to the ground with tears, he looked at his dying city. The demon did nothing but watch as he began to glow. Hernioun told himself he has no right to give up while people are dying at this very moment.

His eyes shined of his will and light as beautiful Wings sprouted from his back. The wings began to meld into his skeleton and painlessly fused the bones in his back. He quickly healed forcing himself back up. The bleeding stopped and all his bones were repaired. Creating a blade of divine energy, almost on fire he whipped his blade with god like speed slashing open the demons gut. Underestimating him the slash burned the demons stomach emitting a powerful burn that sent the demon screeching.

The beast jumped back as he tried to dismiss the fire, however the fire would not disappear. Knowing it can’t touch the flames on his stomach, instead the demon tore off the burning piece of its flesh. He was so glad Hernioun regained his will, while slightly surprised he managed to grow wings.

Facing the demon with no fear or hesitation, Hernioun made a great leap into the air as if he flew before. Flapping his wings huge scorching fire targeted the demon. Dodging the flames, the demon still felt its radiating warmth inches from its face. As the demon tried to get within range Hernioun raised his arm in the air creating a wall of fire. Covering himself in forsaken energy similar to darkness the demon breached the wall of fire leaping through it with slight burns.

As the beast looked up out of the fire he noticed Hernioun disappeared. Detecting his heat he looked behind him but a reaction would be too late. Flying by with tremendous speed, the demon was slashed in the side of his stomach, marking and nearly splitting his body. Hovering in the air Hernioun put his arm in front of him, facing the demon.


The demon’s body was set on fire in a magnificent inferno as the fire on his flesh erupted. Unable to move a gravitational pull temporarily imprisoned the demon in the blaze. The heat alone nearly burnt off all his flesh and destroyed the demons physical body. Screeching of the demon could be heard for miles while he was being forced to burn. The vulgar cry stopped as Hernioun calmed the blaze. He looked at the downed beast as most pieces of skin were removed.

Seemingly deceased, Hernioun landed on the ground exhausted. Seconds after he touched the ground the demon teleported. Fleshless the demon now seek to kill Hernioun after having his fun without any skin the demons fleshy pink muscles were exposed. Hernioun was too tired to react to the demon and tried to make a weak block.

Appearing in front of Hernioun, the beast swung his arm not targeting the sword but his arm. Easily dislocating his right arm, the demon grabbed Hernioun by his neck in bloodlust and spoke to him.

“I’ve been branded by the gods and permanently scorned as a traitor, but now……… there gone”

With Hernioun’s voice slowly being crushed, the demon slammed his head into the ground and stepped on his back.

“I shall mark you just as the gods have corrupted me and abandoned us all.”

With the demon stepping on his back, he took hold of Hernioun’s wings. With great force snapping and tearing was quickly heard. Heaving his wings Hernioun screamed as several bones in his wings were split and dismantled. Powerless and drained he could do nothing but bare and suffer the agony.

After only a few seconds, Hernioun released his final cry after his wings were entirely removed. The demon threw his wings to the ground while Hernioun’s back relentlessly bleed. Looking at the fallen Hernioun the creature soon extended its arm toward Hernioun in an offer of peace.

“Walk alongside me Hernioun I can show you the forgotten truth of our gods.”

Knowing he was going to die, Hernioun rejected him in a faint voice.

“I know the gods are somewhere……….”

“Watching their children strive, they will soon reunify with us….”

Hernioun then accepted his death and closed his eyes as he continued to bleed out. The demon stared at him not saying any words. To make sure Hernioun was dead it punctured his chest, drawing his heart. Crushing the fluid filled organ the blood stained the beast hands. Ending the battle it lifted up Hernioun’s fresh corpse and unfastened its own mouth. His soul was forced from his body into the demons stomach.

Eating Hernioun’s soul his skin promptly reappeared and wrapped his body. Walking back to Talamari he resolved himself into an essence and returned into the child’s body.

Submitted: November 25, 2015

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