On The Spot

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is the first piece of work I have submitted with this account, I have previously put on other work on another account but I cannot find it. So I have put a story made on the spot to try this site out again. Enjoy and tell me if you like it x

Submitted: August 29, 2010

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Submitted: August 29, 2010



The young man stood silently, his breath faltering every few minutes as he amagined the cluncking of the inevitable turning of the brass door knob. Until it happened, at first he thought it was again his mind playing tricks and he held his breath listening... Nothing, no, there was definately some movement... He looked again, yes there it slowly turned in front of his very eyes. The door swung opened quickly and a tall dark figure stood staring into the young man's eyes and gestured a hand towards his face, the young man stepped back in terror and looked on to the man's face. It was immposible to make out in the dim lighting, but there was a menace about hoa euea that glowed a subtle red. Hand still outstretched, the man waved his hand almost undetectabley and laughed softly. The young man braced himself and took a step back, but was met only by a disorientating sensation coursing rapidly through him, his stance wavered slightly and he rocked on his heels. The laughing continued but got quieter in the young mans ears, and he fell...

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