I Want What I Can't Have

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

i wrote this becasue a really good friend of mine left

The feeling so wonderful,
There was a flight of butterflies,
I felt nothing like it before,
I wished I stay with it,
I wish I could only see it,
One more time
People tell me to move on,
Forget it,
But it won’t go,
I knew it would haunt me,
I always thought of it,
In my dreams,
In my mind,
Never gone
I only wish I told,
I wishit felt the same,
I wishit was here,
I want something I can not have,
I dreamt something impossible,
Never to see it again


Submitted: March 15, 2008

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SteelSniper

i don't know what so say to that...

Sat, March 15th, 2008 9:42am

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What do you mean???

Sat, March 15th, 2008 3:48am

SteelSniper

i mean it left me speechless

Sun, March 16th, 2008 6:26am

seesawmae

this is really good, i really know the feeling!! Great poem! :)

Sun, April 13th, 2008 8:50pm

Author
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:) thanks

Mon, April 21st, 2008 3:49am

PISSEDOFFPOET

When you where writing this wer u on smack???lol just kididng.... its alright.... i don't get it though

Fri, May 2nd, 2008 10:09am

Author
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well see i wrote it because i wanted to go out with this dude and he left so
ya
but thnx
keep reading

Sun, May 4th, 2008 1:32am

Olola

I can totally relate to this. I'm always wanting something that I can't have but when you know you can't have it, it makes you want it more. Brilliantly written.

Keep up the good work!

Olola.

Tue, June 3rd, 2008 4:49pm

Author
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thanks, and if you liked that then read some more of my work

Thu, June 5th, 2008 3:54pm

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