BLOODTHRISTY

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

A story of a town who had to have wars to deside who be food for the beast.

The creature of the night

Kept the towns people inside

Locked in tight

Full of fear and fright

Because in this town that is full of war

There were many dead bodies

Bloody and torn

She stalked and walked all of the town

Until the dead bodies where finally found

Many people asked why they had many wars

but the people just replyed

"Our town would be no more"

So a curious town got out of there beds

To make a visit to the town of the dead

but what they saw

Was never seen

It was a hidious creater

who was BLOODTHIRSTY


Submitted: February 14, 2010

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BLOODTHIRSTY

HOW IN FUCKING HELL DO I HAVE 8 READS AND NO COMMENTS. WTF IF U READ COMMENT.... I HATE PEOPLE WHO READ AND DONT COMMENT EVEN IF U DONT LIKE IT....

Mon, February 15th, 2010 1:20am

Wymonig Girlz

Wow grate Poem :)

Mon, February 15th, 2010 1:56am

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thanks

Sun, February 14th, 2010 8:17pm

Chloe the guitar girl

I loved this poem too :) Im actually working on reading and commenting your stuff but it takes time cause im constently hopping on and off the computer and i usually only go on on weekends

But i know what you mean, i had a story with 209 reads and like 2 comments, its kinda B.S. lol

Mon, February 15th, 2010 8:57am

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lol im the same way with hoping on and off. thanks!

Mon, February 15th, 2010 7:54am

palewriter

Another dark night in Blood's world. You did a good job again and I liked the fact that you used your dark name as the title. This tale is reminicent of a short story called "The Lottery" by a woman named Sherley Jackson. Great Job

I know what you mean by little comments. I've gotten over a hundred reads with no comments. Recently I've gotten some comments telling me my mistakes but I don't mind because I want to learn. That's just the way people are I guess. Fuck em! LOL Please let me know when you post again.

Mon, February 15th, 2010 8:03pm

Author
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Ok i def will. thanks for the comment

Mon, February 15th, 2010 12:16pm

SLJONES

Nice one...nice to read your work again,and it pisses me of too when people read and DO NOT comment i always leave a comment
no what ya mean about people asking me to read stories when i have said i do NOT read them well done for this one sj

Mon, February 15th, 2010 9:22pm

Author
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lol. people are just trolls

Mon, February 15th, 2010 3:59pm

Rest

That was awesome, like really good...and ik what u mean bout the comments, well no one really reads my stuff haha, id really appreciatite it if u commented on mine, i could use the criticizm

Tue, February 16th, 2010 12:03pm

Author
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Ok ill stop by your page no and i had to fread out before and then people started commenting

Tue, February 16th, 2010 9:04am

insane1

I agree with you about the commenting. There's a box here for a reason not just to look pretty. I thought it was really cool that you used your name in the poem. The poem was also good to, the traditional creature vs. town massacre. You can never go wrong with those. So now you have 21 reads I think and SEVEN comments, gotta love that ratio. Lol
Have a great day, there's a lack of comments in the air

Fri, February 19th, 2010 9:50pm

Author
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thank u

Sun, February 21st, 2010 10:58am

Teiani

i really liked this poem it was so gripping and left me begging for more great job LOVED IT!!!

Sat, February 27th, 2010 8:47am

Author
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thank u

Sat, February 27th, 2010 11:14am

XxDarkAngelEyesxX

oooh!! awesomeness! :D

Thu, August 26th, 2010 3:41am

AngelNightmaresDeath23

Again I love your work.Its takes me time also.I am here and there on the computer but I will comment on your work when I can.KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!:)

-Angel-

Wed, January 5th, 2011 10:56pm

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