Gangster Love

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Gang love really isnt that great

Gang Lovealt

It looks cool, but its not

No real relationship

No one to talk to when in need

No one to comfort you

No one for you to comfort

It ends pretty fast

Seeming like it never even happened

You look for the next person

Noteven caring what he/she is like

You just need someone to make you look....

cool

Nothing real


Submitted: July 26, 2009

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Brian W

A poem revealing a bit about you and your yearning to escape gang life. Well written

Sun, July 26th, 2009 9:52pm

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Thank you that means tons too me, really :). thats the best comment i have ever gotten

Sun, July 26th, 2009 5:35pm

Katherin Jain

this is good. its very meaningful

Sun, July 26th, 2009 10:10pm

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Thank you som much homie! i appricate the love

Sun, July 26th, 2009 5:37pm

Dancerjs

I agree with brain, this is good. :D I like your stuff, it's funny sometimes.

Mon, July 27th, 2009 1:08am

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thx homie! keep rocking on! :)

Sun, July 26th, 2009 6:19pm

olive8197

real good... keep writing ur strange but good poems

Mon, July 27th, 2009 2:58am

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lol dawg....thank you, you have very good work also!

Sun, July 26th, 2009 8:01pm

IanJohnson

Mane, I knew you were fooling us, you're just a big softy, wanting to be loved.
It was well done again my friend. It makes me feel like a teenager again though, and it's been a while since I was hood, lol.
Keep 'em coming mane!

Wed, July 29th, 2009 2:18am

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yo dude you seem pretty cool, thanks tons for the comments dawg

Wed, July 29th, 2009 6:32am

Esme

aww it's so nice yet so sad. I like it :) keep it up.

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 2:59pm

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yo yo thx homie

Tue, August 4th, 2009 6:52am

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