Gang Love
It looks cool, but its not
No real relationship
No one to talk to when in need
No one to comfort you
No one for you to comfort
It ends pretty fast
Seeming like it never even happened
You look for the next person
Noteven caring what he/she is like
You just need someone to make you look....
cool
Nothing real
Submitted: July 26, 2009
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this is good. its very meaningful
Sun, July 26th, 2009 10:10pm
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Thank you som much homie! i appricate the love
Sun, July 26th, 2009 5:37pm
I agree with brain, this is good. :D I like your stuff, it's funny sometimes.
Mon, July 27th, 2009 1:08am
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thx homie! keep rocking on! :)
Sun, July 26th, 2009 6:19pm
real good... keep writing ur strange but good poems
Mon, July 27th, 2009 2:58am
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lol dawg....thank you, you have very good work also!
Sun, July 26th, 2009 8:01pm
Mane, I knew you were fooling us, you're just a big softy, wanting to be loved.
It was well done again my friend. It makes me feel like a teenager again though, and it's been a while since I was hood, lol.
Keep 'em coming mane!
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yo dude you seem pretty cool, thanks tons for the comments dawg
Wed, July 29th, 2009 6:32am
aww it's so nice yet so sad. I like it :) keep it up.
Mon, August 3rd, 2009 2:59pm
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yo yo thx homie
Tue, August 4th, 2009 6:52amFacebook Comments
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Brian W
A poem revealing a bit about you and your yearning to escape gang life. Well written
Sun, July 26th, 2009 9:52pmAuthor
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Thank you that means tons too me, really :). thats the best comment i have ever gotten
Sun, July 26th, 2009 5:35pm