Phantom Lights

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

i got the idea for this one from the T.V. charger under my desk.

Phantom lights

Small white lights appeared

and floated above my bed,

at first I thought, just maybe,

Someone's messing with my head.


They started moving around like they

were lead by a maganet for each tiny light,

These were not just fireflies, for they were

much too bright.


They danced to a song that just

maybe only they could hear,

but suddenly I could hear it too

just not with my ears.


The slow sweet song played itself

right infront of my eyes,

as several small white phantom lights

danced like butterflies.


They silhouetted me for quite

a time that night,

but faded away at the break of day

and dissapeared at first light.

Submitted: October 31, 2011

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hey..makes me think about ghost in Harry Potter ^_^

Wed, November 9th, 2011 2:17pm


Lol... That wasn't what I was aiming for, but I guess I can see the resemblance :D

Thu, November 10th, 2011 2:38am

Blue Diamond

This Poem I actyally sent into Write 4 Fun's invitation only competition!! Lets Hope I win Something! :D

Thu, November 17th, 2011 10:49am


Skip the cold pizza at midnight next time.

Fri, November 18th, 2011 3:30am


LOL! I cant eat pizza... or any take awayy food in General! it's too processed and makes me sick. :\

Fri, November 18th, 2011 2:28am

cheeky monkey

Hey sorry it took me a while to read it but.....i like it its got great description and flow im not sure the meaning though but mayber im being a bit blond lol but i liked it keep me up to date!!

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 8:54am


Hey didn't dis blondes!!! Ima blonde and I wrote this. It ok though, there really was no meaning to the poem it was just something I wrote one night and kept adding to and changing... Really no meaning at all!!!

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 11:02pm

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