Zoes Revenge

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is the sequal to "My Best Friend Is a Serial Killer" zoe goes after lauren for revenge and blah blah yeahhh, read it! :D

Submitted: February 04, 2010

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Submitted: February 04, 2010

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It’s a normal day for Zoe in her chorus class…or so she thinks. It’s the first day of school and Zoe is just waiting to hear Lauren, her almost killer’s, name on the class list. And here it comes…
Teacher: Lauren Stonebraker?  Is there a Lauren Stonebraker in this class???
Just then the secretary walks in and hands the teacher a note…
Teacher: Ohhh ok. Looks like Ms. Stonebraker has moved to another school! Oh and lookee here it seems we have a new student! Uhh is it Bethany Dolts??  Which one of you is her?
A girl with long, blonde hair and bangs with a lot of make-up on (looking much like lady gaga:P) steps up and raises her hand.
Bethany: Mm, that’d be me.
Teacher: Well alrighty then Ms. Dolts. Your seat would be right next to…..Ms. Dilts! Ms. Dilts please raise your hand!
Zoe smiles and raises her hand. Finally, someone normal after what happened  with Lauren.  Zoe and Bethany could be good friends. Bethany sits down and smiles. Her face…It seems vaguely familiar…Zoe’s smile fades.
Zoe (thinking): Oh my gosh she looks like Lauren! The face! And that smile! No, no, NO! It CAN’T be! Ugh I HAVE to stop thinking about Lauren!
The rest of the day continues and Zoe starts to notice Bethany is in EVERY CLASS with her including lunch! And Bethany keeps talking to Zoe about little things…almost like friends would. Zoe decides she’s really nice. It’s the last period before going home and Zoe is once again seated right beside Bethany. Bethany’s pencil drops and she bends down behind her to pick it up.
Bethany: Ha ha my pencil always keeps dropping!
Zoe: Uh ya. Ha ha.
Bethany: Have you noticed you’re in all of my classes?
Zoe: Oh ya I did. I thought that was a little…strange, you know?
Bethany: No, not really. Because at my old school we didn’t switch classes and have different kids in each class like you guys do. I’ve been with the same class since Preschool.
Zoe: Wow it must’ve been really hard for you to come here then and have everything change.
Bethany: Yes, that’s why I was so glad you’re in all my classes. I  have a feeling we’ll be really good friends!
Bethany gave Zoe a bright smile and really looked like a nice person.
Zoe (thoughts):  Hmm…Bethany might actually be an ok person…I kinda like her. And we’re in all the same classes together…Maybe I can be her friend since she knows no one…
Zoe smiles back at Bethany, willing to give her a chance.
End of Scene 1
Over the next couple weeks, Zoe and Bethany grow closer and closer together. Little does Zoe know what’s in store for her. Bethany is at her house in her room sitting at the mirror. She grasps the top of her hair and slowly pulls it off, revealing her medium-length brown hair. She puts the blonde wig on her bed and attempts to take off her make-up while talking to her hamster, Oreo.
Lauren: HA! That fool Zoe doesn’t even know who I really am! She still thinks I’m “sweet ol’ Bethany Dolts”, and not her worst nightmare, Lauren Stonebraker! It’s only a matter of time before I kill her, Oreo!
Lauren looks at Oreo and pats his head.
Lauren: You’re such a good hamster Oreo! In fact, you’re TOO good…at least you don’t have a criminal record. Did you know they’re STILL looking for Alana? Those cops are such idiots! I just have to be extremely careful with this wig. It almost fell off my head like three times today! Do you know how bad that could’ve been for me?! I could’ve been exposed!! Ugh that’d blow all my chances to kill her! I want to stab her with my freshly sharpened pencil in school and it’s so hard not to!!! I must refrain myself!!! I just need to be patient…like you.
End of Scene Two
Zoe just came out of gym with Bethany. Zoe finished getting changed and she goes around the corner to see if Bethany has finished. Zoe walks around the corner and stands there to wait for Bethany, who is only half dressed. She doesn’t notice Zoe and when she takes off her gym shirt, her wig comes off! Zoe recognizes the brown hair and realizes it’s really LAUREN! Zoe backs around the corner so she isn’t in plain sight but can still see Lauren. Lauren quickly grabs her wig and puts it back on. She glances around quickly to see if anyone noticed. When she is positive no one noticed her wig, she brushes it out and puts on her shirt above her undershirt. Zoe acts like she saw nothing and walks around the corner smiling.
Zoe: Ready to go?
Bethany: Yes.
End of Scene Three
The next day is Friday. At school Zoe catches up with Bethany  in the hallway.
Zoe: Oh hey Bethany! What’s up?
Bethany:  Hey! Oh nothing really!
Zoe: That’s cool! I was wondering if you wanted to come over tonight and sleep over?
Bethany: Sure! Ha ha sounds super fun! I’ll come around 7 ok? See ya then!
Bethany continues walking down the hallway while Zoe stops and watches her with an evil smile on her face. The rest of the day passes very fast. Soon it is 7 o clock. Bethany arrives and Zoe tries to act normal.
Zoe: Oh hey Bethany! I’m so psyched you’re here!!!
Bethany: Like, o.m.g. me too!!!!
Zoe: We should totally watch a movie!
Bethany: Ok!!!
Zoe and Bethany get out the “Scream” movies.
Zoe: I have every single “Scream” movie. We should watch them! Don’t you think so?
Bethany: Are they scary?
Zoe: Sort of! But they’re really good!
Bethany: Ok then!
Zoe and Bethany start watching the first “Scream” movie.
Bethany: This movie is SO amazing! Did you see how that guy stabbed the girl?! It was absolutly perfect!
Zoe: Ok then…
This is exactly what Zoe was waiting for: “Bethany”’s killer side to come out.
Bethany: Uhhhh I mean…Ew did you see how that guy stabbed the girl?! It was absolutly DISGUISTING!! 
Bethany looks embarrassed and her face turns red. They continue to watch the movie when all of a sudden the power goes out.
Zoe: OH MY GOSH BETHANY WHAT WAS THAT!
Bethany: Weird…I don’t know!
Zoe:  Oh great! This is just perfect!
Bethany: Yes…Yes it is..And you know what we should do?
Zoe: What?
Bethany: We should play truth or dare!
Zoe: Uhh ok then!
Bethany: Ok I will go first. Truth or dare?
Zoe: Truth.
Bethany: Ha! You can do better than that! Pick dare! Come on, you know you want to! Pick it!
Zoe: No!
Bethany: Please? I have a really good one!
Zoe: Ugh fine. I pick dare.
Bethany: Hahahaha! Ok! I dare you, to go out and walk in the woods.
Zoe: NO WAY!
Bethany: Oh come on!
Zoe: ABSOLUTLY NO!
Bethany:  Please! I’ll go with you!
Zoe: The answer is no!
Bethany: CHICKEN!
Zoe: FINE! I’LL GO!
Bethany: Alrighty then! Let’s go!
Zoe: Fine.
Bethany and Zoe make their way down to the woods. It’s pitch black and they can barely see anything. They walk in silence about halfway.  Suddenly, Zoe stops and turns to look at Bethany. Bethany stops too. Zoe’s voice is unstable.
Zoe: I know who you are…
Bethany looks amused.
Zoe: You’re not Bethany Dolts…You’re Lauren Stonebraker.
Hands shaking, Zoe slowly takes off Bethany’s wig and throws it to the ground, revealing her straight brown hair. A grin appears on Lauren’s face.
Lauren: So I see you’ve figured this all out, have you Zoe? Ha. I guess you weren’t as stupid as I thought you were.
Zoe: Guess not.
Lauren: Ha I’ve come back for revenge you know. You’ve probably already guessed that.  So, how’d you know it was me?
Zoe: In gym…you’re wig fell off when you took off your shirt…I was right there but you didn’t see me so I hid around the corner and acted like nothing happened.
Lauren: Hmm…clever clever…too bad you have to die…and for real this time. I could’ve used a partner to kill with. You could have been very helpful. It’s such a shame your brain has to go to waste…
Lauren withdraws a knife, but Zoe is too fast. Lauren takes a stab just as Zoe leaps backwards.
Lauren: Hahaha you can try and escape Zoe but this time I WILL GET YOU.
Lauren takes another stab and misses Zoe by just inches. Zoe looks around frantically for a weapon. The only thing near enough for her to grab was a bulky stick. She decides to take her chances and grab the stick. It’s slightly behind her and while backing up, she trips and falls to the ground.
Lauren: Good, I have you right were I want you! And now this is the end! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Zoe grabs the stick and swings. It smacks Lauren across the face and she staggers. Zoe attempts getting up as Lauren takes another stab. She again misses Zoe. Zoe swings the stick again hitting Lauren hard on the head. This time, Lauren staggers and falls. The knife rolls out of her hand and Zoe grabs it. She looks at the knife and Lauren, considering killing her. She can’t do it. Zoe buries the knife in the ground. She drags Lauren to her house and into the basement to the freezer. She shoves Lauren into it and closes the lid. Zoe takes one last look at the freezer and then shuts off the lights and goes upstairs….
End of Scene Four
A couple days later Zoe’s grandma Faye is over. She’s in the kitchen preparing to make some chicken. She checks for the chicken in the freezer in the kitchen.
Grandma Faye: Hmmm must be downstairs!
Grandma Faye closes the freezer door and goes downstairs. She turns on the lights and heads towards the freezer, humming to herself. She is at the freezer now and carefully opens it. She doesn’t notice Lauren at first. She reaches in and gets the chicken and as she removes it, there is Lauren’s face, staring up at her, frozen. Grandma Faye drops the chicken and screams as loud as she can.
Grandma Faye: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


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