I didn’t know what to say. I was speechless. He smiled at me and it gave me comfort. I just couldn’t believe he was telling me this now of all places. I couldn’t believe that someone like him could love me.
Plus, I think I love him too.
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Victoria Lewis has always been the quiet, loser girl in high school. Now, Victoria has just graduated from college and moves back to her hometown to set up her own bouquet store with her friend, Doug, and his mother. Victoria has never dated a boy before so she has no knowledge of relationships until she meets Felix, who was in her high school, and is two years older than her. She had a crush on him in high school and she hopes to fall in love with him this time.
Felix has a brother, Liam, who is the same age as Victoria. Victoria always saw Liam as the dorky type but she has noticed that he has changed over the past six years. Victoria sees some changes in Liam she likes and dislikes. She just wonders if she can get pass all of his drama and be his friend again.
Victoria sees her older sister, Jenna, for the first time in six years and it’s too overwhelming for her. Last time Victoria saw Jenna she never wanted to see her again. After weeks of talking Victoria and Jenna try to stich up the patch that they tore but when Jenna goes back to her old ways will Victoria ever forgive her? Could Jenna really change after six years and forget the past or go back to her evil ways and break her sisters heart?
Victoria realizes that having too many loves can break people's hearts but she couldn't help it. She just loved all of the attention she got as she got older. Victoria notices that she is turning into her sister and she doesnt want that. Victoria tries to make a decision before everything goes bad.
Victoria can see a lot of lying, drama, cheating, and love going on in her life that is too much to bear. She hopes to make the right decision in the end and fall in love with someone for the first time in her life. Hopefully the person she loves will love her back before it is too late.
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Aw that was so sweet (and pretty hot!)! You're an excellent writer and story teller. Wow.
I think I said this already but KMU? :)
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Haha its fine & of course if i can ever update!
Wow, this is amazing. Man, I like both of the boys! :)
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Aw thanks.
Wow, this was great! I feel so bad for Victoria. This is really well written and intriguing.
KMU? :)
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Thanks!
I really like it so far. Jenna is the older sister, right? She sounds like a girl I know.....:P
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Thank you and yes. She reminds me of tons of girls I know. (:
Wow! that kiss was the sweetest hahah, my joining booksie is really worth it.. you are on the way to become a consummate romance writer girl, i guarantee :)
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Wow, thank you. That means so much to me! :D
awesome!!!!i luved it......gud work!!!
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Thank you! :)
Why didn't I read this earlier?!! You're an AMAZING writer, update me? xx
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Thank you doll! I sure will :)
WOW. This chapter was so amazing, please KMU...:D
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Thanks & of course! (:
AWWW...This is soooo GOOD. I'm off to read the next chapter now. :D
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Thanks (:
I LOVE! That kiss between Doug and Victoria was really steamy! I can't believe Victoria didn't realize that Doug's in love with her! OMG! Her first kiss! It was way too magical! I'm tearing up! Oh GOSH!!
KMU!
Lots of love,XOXOXOXO
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Wow, I can't believe you feel this way! Thanks so much & of course :)
wow, Kaylee, lots of readership. Congratulations. So, this was fantastic! I like both the boys! The last scene was really funny when poor Victoria tells Doug that she never kissed anyone before. I relate to that. Indian girls relate to that. they kinda get kissed when they get married. LOL. So, it's at the age of 25 or 29 for some people!
Lots of love, XOXOXO
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Hahaha true! :)
Hey, this is great. I loved it. Maybe I'm going to be the bearer of bad news now but if you could just try to not use the same words so much that would really make this amazing. You're really a very talented writer and I love this story so much.
I knew Doug loves her, I just knew it. He seems like a sweetheart. Keep me updated please. :)
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Thanks & I know I did. I tried to mix up the words but idk if that helped. Thanks! & of course.
Love it!! Kmu:)
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Thanks! & of course. :]
I love this story!Its beautiful!Ooohh lala Victoria likes Doug......well I hope so!They seem good together.Anyway please keep me updated and thank you lovely!
~Lina
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Aw thanks doll! It means a lot to me. :] Who knows whats going to happen! & I sure will! :)
hiiii! this was really good, to say the least:) i loved how the beginning was creative and different, especially for a romance novel.. plus, the storytelling comes off really naturally and just... fresh. keep up the good work! and KMU
~Dianna
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Hellloo. :)
Thanks! & yeah, usually the romance stories I read don't come off with romance first.
Thanks, I'm glad that you like it & for sure! :)
WOW! i am speechless to this chapter :-# luv it! keep me updated? XD
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Aw thanks so cute & of course! :]
NOOOO! I wasn't ready for this chapter to end. It was so amazing and sweet. I got a little teary eyed. I love this story and please let me know as soon as you post the next chapter :)
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Thanks doll! It means a lot to me that you like it so much. :] & I sure will!
awwww poor doug he secretly likes her! LOVE plz KMU
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Maybe, or maybe not! :] & I sure will!
Wow. You really know how to write. You've handled your story, characters, dialogue--everything--with great skill, and you've definitely captured my interest! KMU, as I'd like to see what Victoria does with this latest development in her life. Great job!!
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Thank you! You are too sweet. :] & I sure will!
Hey, sorry I took long to read it, but school's been driving me crazy. But anyways, I really love this story. It was a good start, and I think it was a good idea to write about Victoria's relationship with her sister first, and not start with the whole romance, for it allows the reader to know more about Victoria's feelings, and the way she will act onwards. I especially love the fact that you have included a sibling relationship that seems to be of great importance to the novel in overall, even though the girls don't get don't get along. (for now, right??). Keep up the good work, and I will do my best to try and read the next chapter as soon as possible. :D **~Kyoko. (wow this comment's long, haha)
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Thank you! Lot's of stories that I read don't put romance first so I wanted to do the same. Enjoy! :]
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