the mugging

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

a lady is on her way home..........

It was a cold and gloomy evening as I walked past the gang of teenagers that were drinking and smoking.

“alright sunshine? what you doin’ ‘ere? you know its gettin’ late don’t ya?”they said

 (obviously drunk)I carried on walking and didn’t reply. That was my mistake. The sound of heavy footsteps echoed around me like a drum beating the pulse of a fast tune .My heart was thumping just as fast.

I started sprinting, another mistake of mine. The footsteps behind me grew increasingly faster.I knew I would never outrun them. I swung round the corner full force.

BAM!!!! I smacked straight into one of the gang members. UH-OH! Alarm bells sounded in my head.I’M TRAPPED,CORNERED!

“Well sunshine, Ain’t that perfect? you an’ me gang all alone. Ain’t nobody to ‘elp ya. So ya best listen up now. All we want ya to do when we get to me warehouse is give us all ya money an’ ‘elp us pack crack”

 

i know its not very good but.....

please comment ;D

 


Submitted: June 12, 2012

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Si Cotic

Kind of creepy in its sense
Si
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Mon, February 4th, 2013 3:21pm

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Hahaha! I can't remember how I felt at the time I wrote it but I think that was the idea....reading back on my work it is rather weird ......thanks for commenting on my work.....blue

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 9:54am

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