Clown's Smile

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Book by: Bluedragon

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Status: Finished | Genre: Thrillers | House: Booksie Classic

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Sam Harper is an agent within the FBI and has been assigned to a new case. A young girl, named Chloe Harrison, has gone missing at Clown’s Smile the local toy store when with her mother. It doesn’t take long to find out that it’s a kidnapping case and, with the help of her partner Mike Figgins, Sam begins collecting all the clues. As she gets closer and closer to finding out who kidnapped little girl Chloe, Sam begins to question everyone around her and wander if it is just a normal kidnapping case when bodies start turning up, unaware that the whole time she has become an obsession to the kidnapper.
As Sam gets hurled into a vicious game of cat and mouse she still continues to search for Chloe, before she runs out of time.

(I suck with summaries, sorry if this is crap)

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Chapter 1 (ver.1)

Clown's Smile

Submitted: May 07, 2012

Tracy Harper is an agent within the FBI and has been assigned to a new case. A young girl, named Chloe Harrison, has gone missing at Clown’s Smile the local toy store when with her mother. It doesn’t take long to find out that it’s a kidnapping case and, with the help of her partner Mike Figgins, Tracy begins collecting all the clues. As she gets closer and closer to finding out who kidnapped little girl Chloe, Tracy begins to question everyone around her and wander if it is just a normal kidnapping case when bodies start turning up, unaware that the whole time she has become an obsession to the kidnapper.
As Tracy gets hurled into a vicious game of cat and mouse she still continues to search for Chloe, before she runs out of time.

(I suck with summaries, sorry if this is crap) Read Chapter

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

Submitted: May 15, 2012

I looked at the girl lying on the concrete and I reminded myself that she was dead. I always have to keep reminding myself bec... Read Chapter

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kannette

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Thu, November 15th, 2012 8:54pm

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Thu, November 15th, 2012 8:56pm

thanks...

alex x 3

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Mon, July 16th, 2012 2:59pm

Alex, this is awesome! I will become a fan...

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Mon, July 16th, 2012 5:02pm

Thanks Alex

Asfi

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Tue, July 10th, 2012 2:57am

KMU PLEASE :) I love it

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Tue, July 10th, 2012 3:29am

I WILL! Thanks :)

Asfi

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Tue, July 10th, 2012 2:56am

LOVE IT

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Tue, July 10th, 2012 3:29am

GLADNESS

crimsondawn

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Thu, July 5th, 2012 12:24am

This disturbs me so much... a cousin of mine had to give her baby up for adoption and she is called chloe.. :(

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Thu, July 5th, 2012 8:19am

I'm sorry.

Artemis Lykaios Nightshade

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Fri, May 18th, 2012 10:25am

Sorry it took so long to comment. Read ur story but didn't bother replying I will go and slap myself silly later :P. Ok you did do a nice job mate keep up the good work :) *looks at Ian's comment* Wow daddy, your psychic! You know how how many chapts we'll need! :P

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Fri, May 18th, 2012 12:09pm

hahahahahaha thats ok, thank you for reading and commenting :)

Ian Dawn

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Thu, May 17th, 2012 6:04pm

Dude nice job this has the makings of something get yourself in a possition of about 14 chapters and then lets talk you need at least 200 pages and about 65,000 words. Nice job keep it going buddy.

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Thu, May 17th, 2012 6:07pm

Thanks :) 65,000? *sghs* thats a lot of words lol

Deathstix

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 6:44pm

Wow! This is great! Gosh, your an awesome writer >:D I *sniff* ENVY YOU!!!! (lolz, jk chap) Hey, keep me updated all right? The plot is getting more interesting >8D

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 7:45pm

Thanks Mocho. I'm gonna check out some of your work, Im sure your not bad :) I'm not very good lol, I'm just winging it :P

ZombieHeart714

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 1:46pm

Wonderful work. I think It's Great I can't wait to read more. You are a Very talented Writer xD!

KMU Sweetie

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 2:55pm

Thanks hun

Unknown

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 5:44am

interesting it took a turn from being the mom and daughter to aa detective and harper :)ROSE WAS HERE;P

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 5:52am

Thanks rose :)

Lila Anne

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:29am

This is amazing :D Your a great writer, KMU!

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:31am

Thanks Lila :)

Blackdragon99

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:29am

This is cool. Yeah Expensive suit best to get it ruined during a novel. Good luck with this KMu if I'm around.

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:31am

Thanks Mad, if your around?

Lila Anne

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:27am

Love it Alex :D

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 4:32am

Thanks :)

Deathstix

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Sun, May 13th, 2012 4:08pm

*GASP* WHY DIDN'T I READ THIS BEFORE?!?!??! THIS IS GREAT!!! *hugglez*
Poor chloe!!!! *sniff* KMU PLEASE!!

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Sun, May 13th, 2012 4:11pm

Yes very poor Chloe, this nearly happened to my little sis when I werent looking *Grumbles to self*
Thanks for reading lol, *Hugglez* :D

ZombieHeart714

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Sat, May 12th, 2012 2:44pm

Clowns, Dolls and Puppets Literally scare the hell out of me... But this story set up is just amazing... I can not write to read more... I really want to see what happens... Nothing is better then a good horror story.

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Sat, May 12th, 2012 2:51pm

I couldnt agree more. I hate them, they scare the frig out of me. I'm glad you like it and I'll keep you updated :)

Blackdragon99

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Thu, May 10th, 2012 2:53am

Creepy, I love your style with writing too. This could be sickening, and I am one little posessed clown waiting for more on this story. KMU

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Thu, May 10th, 2012 3:10am

Thanks Mad, your a clown? ehhhh I hate clowns :/ lol

Artemis Lykaios Nightshade

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 11:01am

I agree with my daddy (Ian) I personally hate clowns so this is good so far. In my opinion it could be longer but that's just me, your the author you can do whatever the hell you want. Could use a bit of editing and as for the summary, I suck at it too. kmu-keep me updated :)

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 11:01am

Thanks hun, I'm not a good author haha so your probably right :)

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 5:44am

clows scare the h e duble hokey sticks out of me but i like your storie you make me want to read the next chapter but there isnt one :( keem me updated please :)ROSE WAS HERE

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 6:06am

hahaha hey Rosie and me too, clowns and dolls are just plan freaky :/ lol I'll keep you updated hun thanks

Ian Dawn

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 3:31am

I like it dude I actually love it now you have the chance to make this realy creepy ok so dont let me down I love the set up but its got to be so friggin insane but expected if you get me.

go for it and do your dark Master proud!

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Mon, May 7th, 2012 3:56am

haha thanks master, I'll try not to disappoint, its got clowns and dolls in it, of course its gonna be insane! :)