Slice and Dice

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

I like writing scary shit so I gave it a go. First time I ever wrote and I had some major help but I still think I did crap.

 

I struggled with the ropes as I came to wake, it was digging into my flesh and it was much too tight. I tried to scream when my mind became clear but nothing came out, my throat was dry and I tasted the familiar taste of metal mixed with blood. I tried to look around to see where I was, waiting for my eyes to adjust to the light, but the light never came and all I could see was darkness. I was in a room, yes a room. It was too cold to be outside and I felt suffocated with the walls around me.

I was barefoot, bare chest as well and suddenly a sickening thought entered my mind and I began to scream again when I managed to get my voice back, it hurt like hell but I continued to scream. First for friends, then for anybody who could hear me, hell even for my mother and she was one drunken bitch, but no one came. I decided no one could hear me so I must be isolated somewhere. My legs were tied to the legs of a chair, as were my hands to the arms and no matter what I did I couldn’t get the fuckin’ rope to move even an inch, all it did was burn further into my flesh.  

I growled and cussed and then I waited. For someone, for something to finally come and tell me I had been kidnapped for ransom or payback or maybe to be some lonely guys little ‘toy’. I shuddered at the thought. I just needed to calm down, all I needed to do. I felt stiffness where my limbs meet my body and again I shuddered. Just knowing that some freak out there could have done god knows what to me. They might have cut off my limbs, reattached them and given’ me enough morphine to not notice anything. I couldn’t help it when frustration tears began to peak.

‘Fuckin’ hell Jack, pull yaself together!’ I told myself and I maned up enough for the tears to stop falling.

I heard a large clanking of something opening and then the same sound when it retreated back into place. I could feel another presence in the room and I gulped, I shouted for whoever it was to let me go but they only sighed.

‘It doesn’t speak’ a voice mumbled, it sounded rough an off-putting. It was a man’s voice, one that slurred slightly and had a slit in its voice like ice.

I ignored what he said and began to plead, ‘Please, let me go. What do you want? You want money? I can give you money, just please let me go!’ I didn’t fuckin’ need my pride if I could just get out of here.

I could feel the man rummaging with something next to me and he simply said again, ‘It doesn’t speak’

I tested the ropes again to see if they magically got loose somehow. Still no fuckin’ use.

‘No struggling’ the voice commanded and I felt a sharp sting to my left shoulder that made me cry out in surprise.

‘What the fuck!?’ I yelled, only to get shushed again.

‘It doesn’t speak’

I shook my head in agony and rage. I felt so uncomfortable, so scared and cold. I wanted to go home and I couldn’t help it but continue to beg for my life.

‘It doesn’t speak’ the man repeated, his voice started to take on an edge as he walked around me.

‘Please, don’t hurt me! You don’t have to do this; you don’t have to do anything!’

The man tutted. ‘It doesn’t spe-’

‘Come on, man. I don’t know what you want but just let me go!’

‘It doesn-’

‘Please I don’t want this! I don’t deserv-’

‘SHUT UP!’ The man yelled so loud I jumped from my skin and allowed a large sob to escape me. The tears were running again but I bit my tongue, not wanting to anger him or I could be in real shit. I felt my bottom lip quivering and my whole body shaking. I felt a light hand swipe a tear away from my eye but I shied away, too scared to let him touch me.

I felt the man sigh; he was so close to my ear I froze completely. ‘It shouldn’t make me mad’

The darkness was replaced by sheer blinding light and I groaned by the sudden change. When my eyes grew accustomed to the new sight, I again froze in shock. I was in a panic room; the metal door with bars on the front was proof. The round room was full of pictures of people, some with torn off limbs, some naked, some with their eyes gorged out. My breathing grew quicker when I met the eyes of my abductor.

He was staring at my arm and when I looked down I first saw the maggots. Blood was smeared all over where the socket was kept; little wormy creatures crawled their way around, sucking at my skin. I couldn’t see past the maggots and I felt another sob escape me.

‘Maggots eat away the bad tissue’ he explained briefly.

My right arm felt so numb, I could barely feel the maggots crawling around and I could just make out a sight of sticking down. What had happened? The man, with no fuckin’ warning, tilted my head back to look to the ceiling and I saw the picture. All of them people, all posted on the ceiling, sitting in the same chair I was. All of them look distressed, some shying away from the camera, others screaming into it. Some had legs covered in maggots, some had arms like me, some had hands, some had just stomach and backs.

I gasped and cried out again, so loudly did I cry that I didn’t hear the man standing in front of me with a camera stand. He smiled before going under the black fabric and putting his hand along the clicker.  

‘It says cheese’

Click! 


Submitted: May 05, 2012

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Ian Dawn

I love the way you took the humanity out of teh poor bastard on the floor by refering to him as "IT" that was a stroke of genius. Nice work dude you need to do more a little more finness on teh story and some more expletive and descriptive wording and bam your in.

Again Nice job.

Sat, May 5th, 2012 9:34am

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Thanks bro, tried to make the poor sod as poor as he can be hahaha, I'm glad I dont totally suck, but I got a lot of help on this. Thanks and I didnt wanna describe cos I wanted to let it be a bit of mystery

Sat, May 5th, 2012 2:40am

Usama909

LOL THAT WAS A GOOD PIECE OF WORK,,,,,, MY POEM IS TOTALLY THE OPPOSITE OF IT .....MUST READ THAT TOO +COMMENT

Sat, May 5th, 2012 12:20pm

Author
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Um.. thanks lol, I can check out your poem I suppose and comment on it with capitals

Sat, May 5th, 2012 5:26am

Morenn

That was well written and an interesting read, the lack of explanation as to why he was there or anything really made the story much more suspenseful. Good job man:)

Sat, May 5th, 2012 12:56pm

Author
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Thanks, I thought it would, meh it was my first time, Im glad people are liking it :)

Sat, May 5th, 2012 6:01am

PsychoticThrillers

well damn. that is some good horror material right there. Great idea with the maggots and a very fun way indeed for a psychopath. I'm always intrigued by this kind of thing. I guess you already knew that, considering my username. ah i am very much so addicted to any and all forms of horrors (well, good ones anyway) so if you put up any more i would love to read it. very talented mate

Sat, May 5th, 2012 11:18pm

Author
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Thanks love, I tried to make this rather freaky lol. I'm glad you like it, I love horror too. Thanks

Sat, May 5th, 2012 8:54pm

Miss A

oki that was some scary psycho shit but the shit was damn good. awesome write-up for a first timer. keep writing more stuff.

Sun, May 6th, 2012 8:33pm

Author
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Thank you hun, I'm glad you liked the psycho shit

Sun, May 6th, 2012 10:07pm

Kitaramitsui

I am simply at a loss of words. I do not know what to say to this. I have to agree with Ian, it needs a little more work but it is well written none-the-less! I dare say I may have found some competition ;)

Mon, May 7th, 2012 7:15pm

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I dare say thanks lol, you a dark writer too?

Mon, May 7th, 2012 12:16pm

Deathstix

Wow! This is very creapy- I got chills!! Great job, dragon :)

Mon, May 7th, 2012 7:29pm

Author
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Thanks and the names Alex lol

Mon, May 7th, 2012 12:32pm

Blackdragon99

Wow. Man this was epic, and you said youve never written?!?!?!?!? Alex you crazy! This was awesome, I love how the murderer sounds like an argonian.

Thu, May 10th, 2012 9:52am

Author
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I am crazy ;) but Ive never written before this, other than English assignments and shit, thanks I actually like this story as well lol

Thu, May 10th, 2012 3:11am

ZombieHeart714

I Absolutely LOVE this story... It is amazing... I love the whole set up... I really Hope you add on to it... Maybe make it something bigger...
Great Job!

Sat, May 12th, 2012 1:17am

Author
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Thanks, I might, you never know :) thank you

Fri, May 11th, 2012 6:41pm

William Kael

Ok, f*ck. That was kinda creppy, not gonna lie. I mean there's room for improvement, but you'll improve anyway:)

Sun, May 20th, 2012 12:14am

Author
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Thanks :) I tred to make it creepy

Sat, May 19th, 2012 5:21pm

Bloodykisses

Wow, very dark. I love it :)

Wed, June 13th, 2012 2:37pm

Author
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Thanks dude

Sat, June 16th, 2012 2:06am

xXxDanteAikenxXx

whoa mate, that's some dark stuff yeah? i loved every bit of it. my eyes were glued to the screen, dared not to be looking away. If booksie has this type of horror on here then I'm glad I joined up eh? I feel bad for the dude, sounds like a god awful time to be living through. that thing with the pictures, that's just crazy but it only intrigued me more. you've created a really cool psycho.

Tue, July 24th, 2012 4:35am

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I have!!?!?! GO ME!!!
Whoo hoo!!!
:P
Lol Thanks

Mon, July 23rd, 2012 11:50pm

RevengeForThisEmoKid

ooh....scary...I like dark stuff...it's sexy...haha :P

Wed, November 14th, 2012 5:12am

Author
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Dark stuff is sexy ;D

Tue, November 13th, 2012 10:13pm

Revan Marston

Woah this was intresting.... definetly got chills so you succeded in making me feel uncomfortable! The beggining was kind of... well it was weird haha! But none the less it was great!

Im writing a horror/drama called Epidemic set in a Zombie apocalpyse... check it out maybe?

Thu, February 21st, 2013 11:39pm

Author
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Haha thanks :)
Zombie apocalypse?
I'm there xD

Thu, February 21st, 2013 4:49pm

KatyLee

I don't usually like horror, but this is really good! You made it creepy and mysterious, which is always good:P

Tue, March 12th, 2013 10:40am

Author
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How can you not like horror? :O
Haha thanks, hun. I'm glad you liked my creepy and mysteriousness :3

Tue, March 12th, 2013 5:50am

Hi Im a person

allright, Im gonna have nightmares now

Sat, March 16th, 2013 4:23pm

Author
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Aww sorry

Sat, March 16th, 2013 6:00pm

Chanel Hamilton

Steller! I actually didn't want it to end.. usually I don't read a lot of short stories or novels but I couldn't help but get sucked in. Everything from the title to the ending was captivating. The descriptions were perfect and easy to follow, which is difficult for a lot of people to accomplish without overdoing it. so..right on dude(:

Mon, May 20th, 2013 5:56pm

Author
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Thanks :) I'm glad I sucked you in! In a totally normal non sexual way... thanks for reading :P

Mon, May 20th, 2013 3:13pm

AbstractKash

OMG!!! that was scary and creepy ^_^ I am a sucker for thriller stories and this one was AMAZING. I could totally imagine the 'saw' kind of scenario ;p

Sat, June 15th, 2013 7:48pm

Author
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Thank you xD

Sat, June 15th, 2013 5:39pm

ElizaZenith

Love it! nearly creepy enough for me haha xD It was totally magnificent!

Tue, June 18th, 2013 5:07pm

Author
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Nearly? This is not acceptable O_O
Haha thanks xD

Tue, June 18th, 2013 10:24am

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