Poem by: bluishmaag
pain, sad, escape, cry, cries, emo
Submitted: March 03, 2009
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Hope you guys like it!!!!
wow. It actually took me two reads to figure this one out. It is very short and you must really get deep into it. So this is what I think. This person must finally think they are free from sadness, from depression. That they can rid of it. But then they realize they cannot escape it? That is what I think it is. I liked the words you used to describe how you escape. Good job =] ??
Thanks.. finally! someone understood! LOL ...
I've made some of my friends read it.. And none of them got it...
Great poem. I like writing like this that actually requires deep thought on behalf of the reader. It's a good that I had to read through it three times to finally get it. Slightly obscure...in a good way.
How about "Trapped in Shadows"?
Hmmm.. I like it.. but i doubt i can edit it. Sorry to waste your suggestion. By the way it fits perfectly.
LOL ... hahahahaha ... Thanks Ren!
This very deep! How bout you title it.. Escaping Myself. Or TRAPPED INSIDE MYSELF.. Just suggestions..
I liked it!
LOL .. thanks.. but I think I can't edit it.. sorry..^^
But thanks for the suggestion..
very true i fell i can relate
Awwww... Have this happened to you? In some way(s)???
i like it
i appreciate it
i feel it again
That's what the poem is all about
omg, i love it. i'm emo =)
LOL ... I like EMO, though I'm not one.. haha
Still, I like EMO... ^^
Wow this was good short and right to the point I like the picture I see in my head.
i like the poem... keep it up..!
i loved it..... i think you should write some more. lol i write poems like that but idk if they r any good?.....
i like it its still getting to the ppoint i'm emo and i take poems like honoriable keep it up good job!!!!
HEY I LOVE THE POEM I REALLY LOVE THEM I WRITE SOME BUT I THINK THEY R NOT GOOD
Saying you're not good makes it not good.
Think positive about yourself more.
HEY I HAVE A FRIEND THAT CUTS HER WRITS AND IM SCARED THAT CUZ SHE CUTS HER VEINS AND SHE NEEDED STICHES AND SHE LOST ALOT OF BLOOD PLIZ HELP ME!!!!!
I used to cut. Just tell her cutting is pointless and it won't do any help. If she has something bothering her, tell her you'd listen with an open mind and heart.
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