A Perfect World?

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A world with no hate, no anger, no conflict... is this a perfect world?

Submitted: June 05, 2008

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Imaginea world full of beautiful people, no hate, no war, no suffering, everthing perfectly.. perfect. Well there is such a place.

I was only 15 when I stumbled upon this mysterious place, I was interested in this land, fields of lush green as far as the eye could see, everyone standing around in perfect harmony. The people were beautiful without a flaw upon them but somehow there was something missing, there was no balance, no justice, nothing was out of place it all seemed surreal. The sunlight was never too bright as it shon on the town I was in, the rays were a spectrum of colours and as you looked into the water the echoing rainbow of colour throughout the crystal clear lake reflection the perfection of the surroundings. I looked down at my feet and found a hole in the toe of my sock, not everything was as wonderful as it seemed but nevertheless I was speechless. The local people greeted me with the biggest smile. The old men chuckled with such sweetness that it could not compare to the smile of a new born infant. As I explored this newly found land I stumbled upon a cavern, contemplating entering I thought was this the flaw in perfection, the smudge on the greatest portrait ever painted? I walked cautiously in and was not shocked with what I found...

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