Watch the bird fly
Where do you go?
Will you come back to me?
Have a safe journey home
I wish you didn’t have to leave
You are so far away from me
Should I of set you free
Is that were you want to be
Will remember me?
Come back to see me
I know you are there
My Little bird
Where will you go?
The truth is I don’t know
Will the wind push you away?
What direction will you go?
How can I move on without you pushing me through?
Don’t lose your way
Find your way home
Don’t be frighten when there is no light
Don’t forget your reason why I let you go
I will guide you home
Spread your wings
Fly my little bird
I’ll miss you
You were the only one I had
Its wasn’t fair I kept you
I needed you
To talk about the pain I have been through
You took my heart away
It will always lie with you
You made me complete
Without you I am unsure of where I would be
You opened my eyes
To show me the light
Magic so blinding
Now that you’re gone
Darkness surrounds me
Will I find the light again?
I was lonely before
When you was not here with me
But I am stronger
You told me to find the light
I have been searching everywhere
Just to see you again
There will be a time when all is lost
I am aware of your words now
Many lifetimes have past
Why am I still here without you?
You were my light weren’t you?
I was wrong it is me
That is why I am still here
To guide your souls home
Lost but always remembered
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This is simple but it gives a very good feeling when you read it! Great job :)
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It's nice to have someone/something there for us to speak to when there is something on our minds that troubles us and it's hard to part with it. The important thing to do during partings is to always keep the memorable parts in your heart. The way I see it, the bird could also symbolize having a loved one who you have to part with, they passed away, a lover you broke up with or having a family member move away something along those lines, one you could turn to but now no longer can. Course it's difficult in the beginning but you move on knowing that you have to. In the end, it was for the best as it makes you a stronger person. I liked this poem because it has so many different meanings on can interpret.
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Simple way of describing having to let go of something. Really sweet! Well done! Your poems all look really good! Please take a look at my work and comment? It would mean a lot - I really think you're good at writing these poems!
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A great read about a heartbreaking topic. Excellent writing and lovely poem!
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This is really great! So positive! Loved it!
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Such beautiful words that describe such an emotional concept. It makes it idea of separation and loss so much more pleasent thatn usual.
Keep writing! Your works is gorgeous Xx
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interesting poem. good lines with excellent presentation. good work friend.
it interests me but i don't get the meaning ,i'm going to re-read it til i get it .
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