The Phone Call

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Wish me luck! This flash fiction was entered in the spring writing contest. Good luck to all. Checkout the entries. Great reads by very talented writers....Best regards...Bo Demont

The morning sun shines brightly as Sally sits down in her favorite chair; her mouth watering as she enjoys the buttery aroma of the danish just delivered to her table.  Taking a sip from her coffee, she sees an incoming call from an unknown number.

 
"Hello." Hearing, but angered by a familiar voice, she asks, "What am I doing right this minute?  Are you kidding me? I’m trying to enjoy my coffee.  What do you want?  Yes, I’m alone. Why?  What?  Steve is breaking up with me?  You and he are what?  Well, isn't that special!  You call me... interrupt my morning and you have the nerve... or lack thereof...to tell me that you stole my boy- friend?  No surprise... I always thought you were a backstabbing bitch. What? Don't call you that?  Really?  Well listen up... he’s yours!  All he's got going for him is that he’s in pre-med. Also I heard something I’m sure he’d like to know. Your charming Steve... the knight in tarnished armor, will certainly want to know you have an STD.  I'm betting he’ll kick your infected ass to the curb with that news.  I'm done... gotta make a call... goodbye loser!”
 
“Good Coffee.”
 


Submitted: July 02, 2017

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Silgorious

Unique idea!

Wed, July 5th, 2017 3:55am

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Thank you very much! I love booksie great site for all of us.

Wed, July 5th, 2017 8:28am

Bert Broomberg

Nice little gem.

Wed, July 5th, 2017 8:47pm

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Thank you so much. It was fun writing it.

Kind regards...Bo Demont

Wed, July 5th, 2017 4:44pm

firstrohn

the things women talk about....... for real

Sun, July 9th, 2017 12:13am

Killer Clown

I like it. I nearly chocked on my danish as I read it from laughing.

Sat, July 22nd, 2017 2:13pm

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Poor girl lost out with her STD. Glad you liked it.

Sat, July 22nd, 2017 11:02am

Archia

I could just imagine sitting near this person in the coffee shop and hearing the one-sided conversation, and it seemed so real. This was so great to read, I really enjoyed it and the last line was really good.

Mon, July 31st, 2017 10:50am

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Thanks so much!

Mon, July 31st, 2017 9:20am

Momina Khan

i like it.great work ^^

Sat, December 23rd, 2017 10:35am

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It's pleasing too receive nice comments. My first novel, Nemesis Vector, is here on booksie, if you want to review it.

Warmest regards,
Bo Demont

Sat, December 23rd, 2017 12:03pm

dreamscriber

Year and a half ago reviewed one of mine, only fair I do.

Lead me into a serene expectation only to break it by conflict.

Sat, December 15th, 2018 8:16pm

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Try the Nemesis Vector ....thanks for the comment

Sat, December 15th, 2018 12:32pm

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