Morning Coffee...

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Random thoughts on the little things that make life worth living, or at least bearable, set to rhyme.

Morning Coffee


Morning coffee,
freshly brewed,
there is no better way.

Served up hot,
in my favorite mug,
to help me start the day.

Drink it slowly,
sip by sip,
to chase away the gloom.  

Just one cup,
is all I need,
and off to work I zoom.

In a thermos,
safe and tight,
my stash I keep nearby.

Throughout the day,
cup by cup,
until the well runs dry.

And when it's gone,
I am not sad,
as I put my cup away.

Tomorrow there's
a fresh pot brewing
to get me through the day.


Submitted: December 28, 2011

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dibbledabble

Best way to start the day, strong and black, 11am second mug downed

Like it, the coffee and your verse

Dibs

Wed, December 28th, 2011 11:03am

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Thank you, Dibs. It's nice to just be able to write down something short and silly about everyday things.

Wed, December 28th, 2011 5:20pm

KarolynRisk

Nice! The rhythm was so bouncy, I like it! I don't like coffee so I can't relate but I do like hot chocolate...if that counts xD

Wed, December 28th, 2011 3:54pm

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Counts for me, I like hot chocolate, too. Sometimes I put a little mix in my coffee. Thanks for the read and the comment.

Wed, December 28th, 2011 5:15pm

Mike Stevens

Great ode to the nectar 'o the gods! I also wrote a poem about coffee; Coffee Yes! Coffee yes! Coffee, coffee, you're just the best! Huh?

Wed, December 28th, 2011 8:13pm

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I thought you would appreciate it.

Wed, December 28th, 2011 5:08pm

Brian W

A good poem and I can not start my day without my first cup....I have my special coffee cup at home I have been using for the last 17 years....

Fri, December 30th, 2011 3:42am

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Hear you there. Me too. Handle's been glued back on once, but hey. Thanks for coming by!

Fri, December 30th, 2011 5:09am

sherry1

Love this! Coffee is necessary for my eyes to open and my brain to function. This was so cute. :) Sherry

Fri, December 30th, 2011 4:28pm

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Yeah, I knew you were a coffee fan. I really do drink it all thought the day, even in summer. Don't have to worry about keeping ice or anything, it's always ready and always good. Thanks for the attention, really appreciate it!

Fri, December 30th, 2011 3:30pm

siirdarkmaz

Its different. I see you changed the rhythm and rhyme to an even better one. I really liked it. Good job.

Sat, January 7th, 2012 7:04pm

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I like this rhyming pattern, this is the second time I've tried it. I love the way that rhythm and rhyme can influence the mood of a poem. Thanks!

Sat, January 7th, 2012 12:53pm

sadieblue

hahaha hear hear!

Thu, January 12th, 2012 12:16am

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Thanks for coming by and taking the time to comment. I will be over to have a look myself.

Wed, January 11th, 2012 5:01pm

californiadreamin

I really like this one. You made me salivate a little. I gotta go make a fresh pot!

Mon, January 16th, 2012 12:52am

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Ha! I was drinking coffee most all of the day today. :0) I sure appreciate you taking the time to check out my work. It means a lot to me!

Sun, January 15th, 2012 7:48pm

Ian Dawn

Yep that cuppa joe first thing has two effects with me. lol

Wed, January 18th, 2012 3:29am

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One of the reasons I like jon so much. I really appreciate the visit!

Tue, January 17th, 2012 8:59pm

BITSxOFxKINKY

coffee nicotine and writing my adictions ... i would add sex but cant be adicted to summit you dont often get lol :)

Sat, February 11th, 2012 7:44pm

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Thanks for reading. Well, you could, but you would be a very frustrated addict.

Wed, February 15th, 2012 7:57pm

Lindsey Renea

This was a great poem. I absolutely love coffee. I agree that it makes life bearable. Well done.

Wed, May 29th, 2013 7:08pm

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Thank you! I'll have to come by and see some of your work when I sit down with my next cup!

Wed, May 29th, 2013 7:24pm

Davinder Ranu

Awesome write on Coffee I don't drink coffee but it is very nice to see you have written on something you like to drink...Its creative and its nice to see you written on diff subjects...keep going...

Mon, July 15th, 2013 4:28am

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I've learned from reading others on this sight, you can write about anything. Thanks for the awesome comment!

Mon, July 15th, 2013 6:37pm

garrycroft

Good one Bob. I didn't realise you had been on here so long and attract so much interest...you must be one of the longest "serving" members of Booksie along with Mike Stevens,

I also like the recordings of you reciting. To me poetry comes alive or is at its best when the writer recites. Well done.

Mon, August 19th, 2013 7:52pm

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I'm amazed at the amount of reads I've gotten on some of my stuff, that's for sure. I haven't been here all that long, will be 2 years in October. Mike is great, and so prolific! I don't know how he does it. I like adding reading to my work, and I love some of the other stuff on here, like from Irwinagain, who reads with a great accent. This is a fantastic site, loaded with talented writers. Thanks so much for deciding to spend some of your precious time here!

Mon, August 19th, 2013 7:24pm

Kenisha Liyanage

I like it. I always loved coffee.

Thu, September 5th, 2013 1:58pm

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Just enjoying some right now. And enjoying your comment. Thanks so much!

Thu, September 5th, 2013 8:42am

Gaea Killarny

I love this one and I love love coffee. Love the excitement of the words.

Sun, August 30th, 2015 12:43am

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You are very kind! Nurses sort of live off coffee, so...

Sat, August 29th, 2015 9:07pm

Tangelo

You seem well awake even before the coffee! Very energetic poem and pretty relatable. Well done! I don't drink coffee tho...

Sun, August 30th, 2015 3:46pm

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Ahh, give it time. Once you discover it...Thanks so much for the entertaining visit!

Sun, August 30th, 2015 8:21pm

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