Completing a lover

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A seperated lover is incomplete until the other lover returns.....

 
Completing a lover
 
 
A heart is aching
A soul is bleeding
 
A lover returns
A lover smiles
 
A heart is soaring
A soul is smiling
 
A lover is healing
A lover is complete
 
Boneman 20/04/2008
 
©Boneman productions 2008


Submitted: April 21, 2008

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Lacey Cummings

Hmm? Very nice job. Simple and heartfelt. It's a wonderful job as always Boneman. Your poetry never disappoints. :)

Mon, April 21st, 2008 12:41am

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Thank you Lacey for your kind comments.

Peace

Boneman

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:27am

snowbelle

this is really beautiful. it is very gentle. i hope your lover liked it.
take care
your friend
snow xxx

Mon, April 21st, 2008 5:39pm

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Thank you Snow for your kind comment.

I am sure my lover liked it very much

Your friend

Boneman x x x

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:42am

mum55

Boneman such sweet words of wisdom and love in such a few lines great write.....take care Juliet

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 7:52pm

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Thank you for your very kind words Juliet

You take care as well

Boneman

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 1:17pm

GypsyRose

Aw, this is nice. Anything for a lover like that Boneman! ~ Gypsy

Wed, April 30th, 2008 7:02am

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Thank you Gypsy.... I will do anything for my lover

Peace

Boneman

Wed, April 30th, 2008 10:23am

snowbelle

i came back for another read as i have been having a bit of a hard time lately and i knew this poem would cheer me up as it describes how i geel when i see my lover.
thanks boneman for this wonderful poem
soph xxx

Sat, September 12th, 2009 11:07am

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Thank you Soph.......Things havent been easy with my lover but this poem can bring us together again.

Forever

Boneman XxX

Sun, October 18th, 2009 5:15am

snowbelle

ahhhhhhhhhhhh boneman this poem never fails to cheer me up.
soph xxx

Wed, May 5th, 2010 8:48pm

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Thank you Snowbelle, your comments mean a lot to me.

Glad I cheered you up

Forever

XX Boneman XX

Wed, May 19th, 2010 5:14am

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