Completing a lover

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A seperated lover is incomplete until the other lover returns.....

Submitted: April 20, 2008

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Submitted: April 20, 2008

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Completing a lover

A heart is aching

A soul is bleeding

A lover returns

A lover smiles

A heart is soaring

A soul is smiling

A lover is healing

A lover is complete

Boneman 20/04/2008

©Boneman productions 2008

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Lacey Cummings

Comment | 18 words

Sun, April 20th, 2008 5:41pm

Hmm? Very nice job. Simple and heartfelt. It's a wonderful job as always Boneman. Your poetry never disappoints. :)

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Comment | 9 words

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:27am

Thank you Lacey for your kind comments.

Peace

Boneman

Unknown

Comment | 10 words

Sun, April 20th, 2008 6:40pm

Simply but clearly put. Delicate yet strong. I like it.

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Comment | 9 words

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:24am

Thank you for your kind comment Anna

Peace

Boneman

snowbelle

Comment | 20 words

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:39am

this is really beautiful. it is very gentle. i hope your lover liked it.
take care
your friend
snow xxx

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Comment | 22 words

Mon, April 21st, 2008 10:42am

Thank you Snow for your kind comment.

I am sure my lover liked it very much

Your friend

Boneman x x x

mum55

Comment | 18 words

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 12:52pm

Boneman such sweet words of wisdom and love in such a few lines great write.....take care Juliet

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Comment | 14 words

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 1:17pm

Thank you for your very kind words Juliet

You take care as well

Boneman

GypsyRose

Comment | 12 words

Wed, April 30th, 2008 12:02am

Aw, this is nice. Anything for a lover like that Boneman! ~ Gypsy

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Comment | 12 words

Wed, April 30th, 2008 10:23am

Thank you Gypsy.... I will do anything for my lover

Peace

Boneman

Unknown

Comment | 28 words

Thu, May 1st, 2008 1:41pm

Boneman this is a beautiful poem for your lover. It is such an awful feeling being separated from a lover. And such an amazing feeling being together.
Lydia

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Comment | 29 words

Thu, May 1st, 2008 1:55pm

Thank you Lydia.

Being seperated from a lover is like having your heart wrenched in two. When I see her I can feel my heart becoming complete.

Peace

Boneman

Unknown

Comment | 6 words

Tue, October 21st, 2008 9:36am

Beautifully simple and simply beautiful.
Dani

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Comment | 12 words

Wed, October 22nd, 2008 1:21pm

Thank you.

My lover is beautiful but words seem inadequate.

Peace

Boneman

snowbelle

Comment | 46 words

Sat, September 12th, 2009 4:07am

i came back for another read as i have been having a bit of a hard time lately and i knew this poem would cheer me up as it describes how i geel when i see my lover.
thanks boneman for this wonderful poem
soph xxx

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Comment | 21 words

Sun, October 18th, 2009 5:15am

Thank you Soph.......Things havent been easy with my lover but this poem can bring us together again.

Forever

Boneman XxX

snowbelle

Comment | 12 words

Wed, May 5th, 2010 1:48pm

ahhhhhhhhhhhh boneman this poem never fails to cheer me up.
soph xxx

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Comment | 19 words

Wed, May 19th, 2010 5:14am

Thank you Snowbelle, your comments mean a lot to me.

Glad I cheered you up

Forever

XX Boneman XX