Baby oh Baby I can save you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

She cant see what i see . and she is stunning in every way .

Baby oh Baby let me tell you a secret.

You are a scarlet love.

you are more beautiful than your universe eyes show.

Even when your arms show a brand new master piece, well baby girl that's when you are the prettiest. No lies .

~ You slice the hurt away~

well let me let you in on something,

you're more important to me more than our troubled minds could ever think.

You stay enclosed with your self .

Come close to me I'll open my arms and rescue that heart that's faded away.


Submitted: April 18, 2012

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hotstory4you

i like it, its beautiful.

Wed, April 18th, 2012 12:30pm

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awee Thank you so much

Wed, April 18th, 2012 5:34am

Nicky Xander

Argh!! why are you so good at writing? Really good job fantastic. Can feel the emotion all the way over here in England. Wish I could press like more than once ;)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 6:08pm

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i hac\ve no idea i am really self hidden about my writting i only post in on here and one other thing no many of my friends have not seen or even read any of my writting. I am so glad you can feel what i am writtin g that all i want to get across. aweee you are so very sweet love

Wed, May 16th, 2012 12:08pm

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