Inside and out i die

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

you can only go so long holding it all inside of your self

Everything is clouding my mind , everything is wearing  me out .My heart is tearing me inside and out and nothing is simple anymore.

No matter how hard I try it never seems enough . Its not worth it anymore , nor will it ever be . It just cant and wont be the same .

For so long of anger,sadness, resentment, hatred and ugliness can be built up .


Submitted: April 01, 2012

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Ghonesis

I don't completely get why you put the word 'ugliness' in the last line. =P
But a great poem. =)

Sun, April 1st, 2012 8:46pm

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i put in there as a like a text to describe ones self or how they portray them selfs ..
thank you very much :)

Sun, April 1st, 2012 7:06pm

hoplessromantic

It feels as if you have read my mind and wrote what I feel... I love it! Great work and the picture really goes with it! Loved it and keep up the good work!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 2:19am

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i feel alot of this alot , im glad im not the only one who feels like this , like i can capture some one else and not just myself , im soo glad :D ,i try to make most of the pics go with all my stuff , im happy you loved it thank you very much

Sun, April 1st, 2012 7:46pm

Brian W

It is not good to let things build up..You need to share the burden..A good poem

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:32pm

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yeah i know but hate talking about what im feeling i feel like im hurting more people when i talk about it . or that im just a burden on them but my writing is how i can get some of it out . thanks you :P

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 4:46pm

Brian W

I have a poem called "A Spare Ear" if you want to read it...You are not a burden

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 2:18am

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yeah i will check it out :)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 7:11am

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