my own heaven

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

nothing really but the way i see this

Heaven is not the place where I wear all white clothes or have wings or see "god"or the place where i can fly or even live in a cloud

It's the place where I don't have to worry about the next day has instore for me, the place where i know i can look down on the ones i love and ease their pain away, as they hold my spirts hand..

where my heart feels no pain..

my heaven is a place no where i am dead but simply alive .


Submitted: February 26, 2012

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Ghonesis

So simple.. =D
I totally agree. It says in the bible that in heaven we will all sing to God's glory for eternity.
That's why the heaven of God sucks, and your personal heaven is best. =)
(ranting) Anyway, liked it! A lot! I'll fan you! xD

Tue, March 6th, 2012 7:23pm

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:) lol its all good , i have no idea what it says in the bible though haha .. but i do agree , im glad you liked it and thanks :>

Tue, March 6th, 2012 12:29pm

Miss Trevize

"Heaven" is such a pliable word. Good of you to apply it like this! Unusual poetry style, and for sure worth reading.

Fri, March 9th, 2012 1:21am

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is that a good thing .. and im glad u enjoyed reading it though

Thu, March 8th, 2012 6:07pm

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