your hell killed me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When I get hurt by the one person who I thought would never hurt me.

I let you ruin my love , kill my heart.. drag me to your hell and back

but i'd never let go

 

not even when your hell was setting me up in flames ,

or even when the over bearing sound of my heart screaming for realse pierced my ears. i still held on to you .

hopeing soon it would go away and then we could be happy.

 

you knew I would'nt take the chances of letting you go and looseing you . and thats why you drug me threw so much

I held on and yet you never saw my pain in my eyes , or my unspoken words .

 your hell was killing me

while i was trying to simply keep you alive and smiling

 

 

 


Submitted: February 24, 2012

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Acie Anderson

This really caught my eye. I enjoyed this very much!

Sat, February 25th, 2012 6:22am

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im glad you did :) !

Sat, February 25th, 2012 12:08pm

Pon and Zi

Nice poem Boobearlover!:P

Sat, February 25th, 2012 4:34pm

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thank you very much :D

Sat, February 25th, 2012 12:09pm

Ghonesis

Great emotion.. and a great poem. =)

Tue, March 6th, 2012 7:19pm

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thanks you c:

Tue, March 6th, 2012 12:27pm

Miss Trevize

The living damn-ed have it bad.

Fri, March 9th, 2012 1:22am

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yeahh

Thu, March 8th, 2012 6:08pm

iola ried

Its great! Keep writing =D

Fri, March 16th, 2012 1:27pm

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Thank you very much

Fri, March 16th, 2012 5:54pm

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