The Adventures of Sanura
Short Story by: Booklover9216
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The Adventures of Sanura
Ch.1, Effects of the War
I sat on a rock playing through my head what had happened to my village. The bombs, fire, and the sounds of gunshots and people screaming. I was the last one. The last of the Mistisay Village. I cried for hours until I cried myself to sleep next to the rock. When I woke up I saw a woman. Seeing her daggers and red leather armorthat perfectly shaped her body and legs I assumed she was a Rogue, (which where I live means a warrior woman who fights for what she believes in, but travels and fights on her own). She told me her name was Azula, and that she was a traveller. Right away I felt like she wasn't telling the whole truth. Everything about her was sort of dark and secretive. She told me she knew a place I could stay after I told her the tragedy of my village. She didn't give much sympathy but simply nodded her head. We started walking up the mountain when I noticed she was walking steadily and fast, and she wasn't getting tired. I had already broken a sweat after twenty minutes or so. We stopped to take a rest once but we had no food or water to regain our energy, or atleast mine, considering her lack of exhaustion. We walked until sunset and finally we got to a small building made completely out of cement. It looked old and unused, with overgrown vines. Inside there was water and a few beds. Azula went into the only other room mysteriously, and then came back quickly with an evil look on her face. "You don't know how long I have waited for this moment, Sanura." she said. She took out her daggers and didn't break her stare. We started to walk around each other like in a boxing ring. I knew she was up to no good from the start. I thoughtWhy me? And how did she know about me for "so long"? Why was this evil rogue about to attack me?Is she even a Rogue?
Find out in the next chapter! (yes it actually says this on the paper I wrote lol)
(Lol sorry the chapters aren't very long, what can I say, I was 13!)
Ch.2, Azula's Secret
While we were pacing around each other, suddenly, Azula took a handful of powder out of her pocket and threw it over me. I passed out for what seemed like only a minute. I woke to the sound of gunshots. I was in a room completely made out of glass windows, even the floor, and it was thousands of feet above the ground, attatched to a tall cement building. I was tied up and sitting on the glass floor. I looked across the room and I saw my sister Shazi tied up as well. I'm not the last one!! I thought. I'm not the last of the Mistisay Village! Azula was in the middle of the room and slowly transformed into a giant rat. The gunshots were coming from air warriors outside the room,with their jetpacks,from the Kai empire. They were trying to get to Azula. Azula broke one of the glass windows with her rat fist. Then her finger extended into a vine that snatched one of the guns from a warrior. She started killing the warriors while I slipped my small hands out of the rope tied around my wrists. I punched through a glass window also and snatched one of the warrior's guns before they could shoot me. I tried to shoot Azula, but there was no more ammo in the gun. So I dropped it and ran to the entrance that led to the cement building. The entrance looked like a big plastic yellow pipe. It was just the right size for me to climb in. Then I peeked my head out of the pipe and called to Shazi to come. she slipped free of the ropes but hesitated to run, for fear that Azula would catch her. I told her to hurry and she ran to the pipe entrance. We escaped down many stairs to a room with a big hole in one of the walls. Probably from a grenade explosion from the war. I climbed out of the hole and hung down, we were only one story from the ground and there was no more stairs. The room I hung down from was held up by big poles, and under the room it looked like a large bed the same size as the room we were just in. It even had a giant pillow and blanket. I saw the pillow move, and from under the pillow came Azula's face. "You can't run from me." she said. How did she find us?? Then another powder cloud and I was out cold again.
Find out what happens next in the next chapter of "The Adventures of Sanura"!!
Pretty crazy dream, eh? Tell me how you like it!!
Submitted: December 24, 2009
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Really excellent story. Liked it very much. Really interesting this came from a dream. I hope you have a great Christmas. Susan :)
Thu, December 24th, 2009 8:04pm
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Thank you! I hope you have a good Christmas as well! :D
Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:38am
This was really good!! Glad i read it! Hope u have an AWESOME CHRISTMAS!!! :)
Fri, December 25th, 2009 12:28am
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THANKS!!!! I hope you have an AWESOME CHRISTMAS as well!!! Thank you!! :D
Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:38am
Pretty crazy indeed but it was Awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next but i guess i'll find out in the next chapter, lol! Keep me posted ^-^
Fri, December 25th, 2009 1:37pm
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I really dont know if I can finish what my mind has created, I dont think I could make it as good lol I know that sounds funny. I think I'm just going to leave it as is though. I'm not very good with stories, although my subconscious is, as you can see lol. Thanks for the comment!! :D
Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:37am
Its is incredible what mind can dream, in which dangers it puts you in and then you have to face them. This was a good story which you could make into a novel. But nonetheless if you make it or not you have a like from me. Happy New Year.
Fri, December 25th, 2009 4:04pm
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Yes my mind is pretty crazy, but still, this dream surprised me, I didnt think I could think up something this crazy, and in my sleep nontheless!!!!! Thank you so much!! Happy New Year to you too!! :D
Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:35am
you have so much cooler dreams than I do! i always forget mine and knowing that you were only 13 years old - that i simply amazing!
// Nanna :)
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Yeah, well I havent had one as cool as this in a long time lol XD, but yea I was surprised I remembered the whole thing! i'm glad I wrote it down! Thanks for the comment!! :D
Sat, December 26th, 2009 9:32am
That was so awesome!!! It surely is a great adventure, you can paint a vivid picture with writing. Just wonderful!!!!
Mon, December 28th, 2009 3:55pm
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Thank you so much!! :D I'm glad you like it!
Tue, December 29th, 2009 5:26pm
Wow I love crazy dreams. Yours could make an awesome novel or something! =]
Really good!
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lol thanks! Yeah I love crazy dreams too!! :D
Fri, January 1st, 2010 1:12pm
I think this was wonderful! especially considering you were only thirteen when you wrote it. Have you considered rewriting it now? Great Work!
Mon, January 4th, 2010 8:51pm
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lol I never said how old I was when I wrote it I just said it was 2 years ago!!! lol. No I dont think I want to rewrite it now, I want to keep it as is just because its the original. Thanks for the comment!! :D
Mon, January 4th, 2010 4:28pm
Wow, I'm not the only one who write stories based of a dream that I had XD. This sounds really adventerous and cool! Keep me updated ^^.
Sat, January 9th, 2010 6:01am
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Lol thanks!! :D
Sat, January 9th, 2010 9:57am
Oops, I actually did say I was thirteen lol I'm just reading it now and I WAS 13!!! Lol!! Ugh, I get so confused sometimes...
Tue, January 12th, 2010 1:08pm
Wow! All from a dream. I am a great one for dreams and inspiration from them. I feel dreams can be a link that reveals things to you. Wonderful. And also considering your age at the time quite a write!
Fri, January 29th, 2010 2:08pm
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Thank you!! Maybe it was trying to reveal something to me, but I dont think I got it!! I never understand my dreams...maybe I need an interpreter lol. Thanks for the comment!! :D
Fri, January 29th, 2010 8:05am
I can tell that you made this when you were 13! ^-^ I used to do the same thing untill someone told me about paragraphs! lol! I loved the idea tho! It could turn into a wonderful story!
Fri, January 29th, 2010 9:42pm
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lol yeah but I think ima leave it as is instead of making it into a story, I just wanna keep it the way it was so i'll remember. Thanks for the comment!
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Haha, crazy situation, but you know what? I like crazy :D I think this is very good considering you wrote it when you were 13 (it's much better than my sister can do and she's 14). Let me know when you post the next chapter of The Adventures of Sanura :D (woo!)
Thu, December 24th, 2009 5:22pmAuthor
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Lol thanks, but this is the whole dream, and unless I dream about it again, I dont think there will be any more chapters of The Adventures of Sanura lol. I'm glad you liked it! When I had the dream I thought it was absolutely amazing!! lol XD Thanks for the comment!! :D (Oh yeah and please please tell me when you are posting anything new, I am DYING to read what you post next!)
Thu, December 24th, 2009 11:20am