One day i asked my tear...
Dear...!
Why do you show up every now and then...
and sometimes.... uninvited...
don't you think its enough...?
The tear replied as it rolled down my cheek...
"I show up only when its enough...!"
Submitted: December 15, 2011
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I love this. I think it's rather eloquent and very expressive in a few stanzas. Well done.
Fri, December 16th, 2011 2:12am
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thanx Morgan Lee for your valuable time and words.
Thu, December 15th, 2011 8:53pm
thank you ladies.. jojofly246 and morgan lee. my compliments for your valuable time and words.
Fri, December 16th, 2011 4:46am
I adore this ... tho I have tears because I can't get enough or any even
I am surprised this did'nt get more reads beautiful work
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thanx a lot for your time and kind words...!
very strong and beautiful
Fri, June 22nd, 2012 9:42pm
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thanx MCLC.
Sat, June 23rd, 2012 1:08pmFacebook Comments
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This is really sweet, just know tears come down my face on it's own when it feels like. Soemtimes I will get really red and I will get angry and then want to punch someone and then I start to feel guilty and tears come down my face. Tears come down when it feels like and when it feels like it can't hold no more. It gives up. Hey but good poem I do really like it.
Thu, December 15th, 2011 4:22pmAuthor
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thanx jojofly246 for your valuable time and words.
Thu, December 15th, 2011 8:54pm