Forever thine

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Well, I really want my partner to marry me, but I am too scared of asking!
Well, because I'm young, and because I'm terrified of a 'no'.
This poem is about me describing what my head is full of sometimes.
Please, read and stuff!


Forever thine


How should I do it?

Down on one knee?

Watch as my partner rejects me?

You’re only young they say, they plead,

It’s not a want I tell them, it’s a need.

To make him mine,

To make him thine,

In sickness and in health,

Till death do us part?

I wish it be that he marries me,

I couldn’t live alone.

For if he said for me to wait,

I’d surely turn to stone.


Submitted: April 08, 2012

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Hey I was just browssing ur page :D and i saw this ..its really cute!!!

Fri, April 13th, 2012 8:02pm


Thank you!

Fri, April 13th, 2012 2:57pm

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