A Nightmare Inside of a Nightmare

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I woke and I could only move my eyes and not my body. I hear weird noises and I am petrified with fear.

Submitted: October 23, 2011

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A Nightmare Inside of a Nightmare (Part 1)

Unable to move my body but only my eyes. I was literally stuck to my bed. Looking all around in terror hearing unusual voices but unluckily for me my mouth was clamped together therefore making me not unable to shout for help.

I realised that everything around me was gone except one big mirror which I have never seen before. Suddenly I heard someone’s heavy feet coming my way making annoying, squeaky noises as they walk. I started praying to God saying please” don’t let me have to go through this much pain to die”.

Still hearing those creepy footsteps, they stopped right in front of my door and the door knob starts to turn at a very slow pace. Now it is finished its full turn and I see the top of a hangar coming through first then a big boot after. I closed my eyes cause I didn’t want to see my death; then I was frightened up hearing this loud scream and it was my mother shouting saying, “Brandon you urinated the bed and it is all on the floor!”. Then I realised it was only a nightmare but a sudden thought came to my mind saying, “Why can’t my body still move”.


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