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I was expecting a summary of some sort. Hopefully we get more detail.
Tue, October 27th, 2015 8:55pm
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Trust me, you will. This was just supposed to build suspense. Thanks for your review. >:)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 1:58pm
Wow, that's interesting, and I'm pretty curious now.
Tue, October 27th, 2015 10:29pm
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I'm so glad!! thank you so much for taking a look, I'll message you when the book is up.
Tue, October 27th, 2015 3:36pm
SERIOUSLY THATS IT WHAT KIND OF HORRIBLE TORTUROUS BEING ARE YOU?!?! This was such a great start waaahhhh and I was like, what comments already, where's the rest! This is not a joke anymore, what do you mean it comes out Dec 1st...?! *mentally screaming* nooo, this is such a horrible tease, whyyyyyyy?! Def fanning for updates! 8)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 10:42pm
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Mwhahahhah!! Thanks for stopping by and checking this out, and i'm glad your so tortured!! Aw! Thanks so much for the fan request, it's means everything to me. You'll be the first to know when the book is out, maybe even sooner. >:) Thanks again!!
Tue, October 27th, 2015 3:47pm
This is brilliant honestly. It's so simple yet, has me curious and I hate the fact that I have to wait so long. I will be waiting for it to come out. awesome
Tue, October 27th, 2015 11:01pm
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Awesome!! Thank you so much!! I will let you know when i's out, thank you!! >:)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 4:09pm
Well... not what I was expecting. Well played. Well played indeed. Let me know when I can read more :)
Wed, October 28th, 2015 5:10am
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For sure!! And thank you so much for the reading request!! You are simply awesome!! :)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 10:19pm
Intriguing. I like it :) Definitely let me know when it comes out.
Wed, October 28th, 2015 6:35am
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Sure thing. Thanks for checking it out!! :)
Wed, October 28th, 2015 8:16am
Wow, such a teaser are you? The tagline was brilliant. You can put this on posters and trailers haha. Can't wait to read the novel :)
Fri, October 30th, 2015 11:46pm
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Well thank you!! i'm so glad it seems to be taking off well. thx so much for your support! :)
Sat, October 31st, 2015 8:57am
This is a great start ;) You have me hooked! I don't normally ask for updates but you do have me here, I want to know more!! Who is she, where did she go? *clap clap* Brilliant!
Mon, November 9th, 2015 4:09pm
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:) Thanks so much!! Will keep you updated. :)
Mon, November 23rd, 2015 11:08am
Hey,you know something I wanna learn,the awesome way you use suspense. I wanna read a book of yours about angels and demons,but its not available now,you write good. I just posted the first chapter of my book 'son of heaven',its the kinda stuff you'll like. Check it out and comment on how I can be better in using suspense. Thanks.
https://www.booksie.com/posting/derrah-ohallem/son-of-heaven-452815
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DJcyan
Ooh, quoting Greatest Show Unearthed are we? Hehe...(trying not to fangirl so freaking hard right now have you heard Gory Demise I like that one okay sorry I'm done now) PLEASE tell me when you have this finished I wanna read this really bad. And also, tell about all the other awesome stuff you come up with. And my last point- I know I've dragged you through a million and two stories that I never finish, but I feel good about this one. It's called Heartbreakers. Anyhow, seeya around! ~DJ
Tue, October 27th, 2015 8:38pmAuthor
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Yes!! Buried alive and Greatest show unearthed are my favorite!! And yes, I have heard just about every Creature Feature song you can possibly find. >:)Yes, I will for sure message you when I put up the full version of the book. And don't be sorry, I love your works!! I will read your stuff! >:)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 1:45pm