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I was expecting a summary of some sort. Hopefully we get more detail.
Tue, October 27th, 2015 8:55pmWow, that's interesting, and I'm pretty curious now.
Tue, October 27th, 2015 10:29pmSERIOUSLY THATS IT WHAT KIND OF HORRIBLE TORTUROUS BEING ARE YOU?!?! This was such a great start waaahhhh and I was like, what comments already, where's the rest! This is not a joke anymore, what do you mean it comes out Dec 1st...?! *mentally screaming* nooo, this is such a horrible tease, whyyyyyyy?! Def fanning for updates! 8)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 10:42pmThis is brilliant honestly. It's so simple yet, has me curious and I hate the fact that I have to wait so long. I will be waiting for it to come out. awesome
Tue, October 27th, 2015 11:01pmWell... not what I was expecting. Well played. Well played indeed. Let me know when I can read more :)
Wed, October 28th, 2015 5:10amIntriguing. I like it :) Definitely let me know when it comes out.
Wed, October 28th, 2015 6:35amWow, such a teaser are you? The tagline was brilliant. You can put this on posters and trailers haha. Can't wait to read the novel :)
Fri, October 30th, 2015 11:46pmThis is a great start ;) You have me hooked! I don't normally ask for updates but you do have me here, I want to know more!! Who is she, where did she go? *clap clap* Brilliant!
Mon, November 9th, 2015 4:09pmHey,you know something I wanna learn,the awesome way you use suspense. I wanna read a book of yours about angels and demons,but its not available now,you write good. I just posted the first chapter of my book 'son of heaven',its the kinda stuff you'll like. Check it out and comment on how I can be better in using suspense. Thanks.
https://www.booksie.com/posting/derrah-ohallem/son-of-heaven-452815
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DJcyan
Ooh, quoting Greatest Show Unearthed are we? Hehe...(trying not to fangirl so freaking hard right now have you heard Gory Demise I like that one okay sorry I'm done now) PLEASE tell me when you have this finished I wanna read this really bad. And also, tell about all the other awesome stuff you come up with. And my last point- I know I've dragged you through a million and two stories that I never finish, but I feel good about this one. It's called Heartbreakers. Anyhow, seeya around! ~DJ
Tue, October 27th, 2015 8:38pmAuthor
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Yes!! Buried alive and Greatest show unearthed are my favorite!! And yes, I have heard just about every Creature Feature song you can possibly find. >:)Yes, I will for sure message you when I put up the full version of the book. And don't be sorry, I love your works!! I will read your stuff! >:)
Tue, October 27th, 2015 1:45pm