Ardenglade's Anthem

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

I am making this complicated book called Aldonkwia and the main character is Ardenglade. She is a girl who likes tochange things, people's point of view, wrong actions, etc.
This is her anthem.

The people we have become,

Are not always who we intended to be,

The champions we look up to,

They're the very low lives we despise,

Moonlit nights are our sunful days,

Growing up shows us to reflect on the passing time,

Mysteries become clear through time,

Hope never fades when we do,

You are what you want to be,

Not who they say you are,

Don't change who you are....


Submitted: June 08, 2007

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celeron22

This was lovely! Very well written. I think this should be everyone's anthem. Too many people try to be someone they're not, due to different situations, but at the end of the day, you are who you are and you should feel proud of who you are. Again, well done.

Sat, June 9th, 2007 12:47am

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I feel honored, thanks. I know how hard it is to be yourself when your trying to fit in so badly! But I've always been myself. It has made me feel a little outcasted, but everything turns out right in the end.

Sat, June 9th, 2007 3:52pm

EdwardJBradleySr

Breettey Skye:

Well written and interesting treatment of theme.

Candor and genuineness. At least in ways in which we choose to relate to ourselves. Gave it a "5".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sat, June 9th, 2007 1:38am

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Thank you. I enjoy showing what we shouldn't be and just to be yourself.

Sat, June 9th, 2007 3:58pm

Korie Liebe

Beautifully written- and a good message for everyone. It says that you should have faith in yourself and trust that you are beautiful just the way God made you, and no one can change that. Absolutely love it.

Sun, June 10th, 2007 8:34pm

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Thanks K. I hope to have the pleasure on working on a short story or something with you soon! Let me just finish lockdown.

Sun, June 10th, 2007 4:22pm

Kuatsimoto

wow... this really goes with ur bio..:D you sending a message of reconfirmation and ro revise lives too the world... nicely done!!!

Mon, July 9th, 2007 3:49am

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um, huh?

Mon, July 16th, 2007 11:34am

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