Poem by: Brian Peza Perrins
fresh air, wonderful morning air, still morning
Submitted: January 29, 2008
© Copyright 2016 Brian Peza Perrins. All rights reserved.
Has a ring to it.
Very nice Haiku, Brian! A lovely image you have created with the simple 5-7-5 format, especially for your first attempt at Haiku!! Bravo!.....Jerry
Many thanks for your kind comment Jerry, have you an opinion on rhyming Haiku? I know in it's original concept it did not use it.
Conjours up a nice picture Brian. Ricky.
Many thanks for your comment Ricky
Creates a nice image. Beautiful!
Thank you, yes it does doesn't it, just working on some ryming Haiku, not sure how people will take it though.
beautiful, well pictured
Thank you Graeme, I will pop by and read some of your work.
oh very lovely indeed!! you are so talented, great work here!!
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