Once upon a dream

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Poem by: Brian Peza Perrins

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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There are lot's of lonely old people in the world with time on their hands to look back in their lives.

Submitted: February 26, 2009

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Once I was a young girl with dreams and aspirations

Then I was a lover, lying in strong and caring arms

As a wife I enjoyed a strong and loving relationship

Then as a mother I experienced the bond of children

Now as I reach my older years I’m a lover no more

Neither do I have anyone to wake up to in the morning

There’s no longer anyone knocking on my door

Nor does the phone ring with greetings in my ears

I often look back and wonder, were did it go?

I sometimes dwell and ponder the ‘what if’ scenario

The aspirations now, have long been and gone

Although I’m tired and aging the dreaming still goes on

Copyright Brian Peza Perrins2009

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gerabel

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Thu, February 26th, 2009 5:29am

Ohh... If it were not for our dreams, Brian! A lovely, 'looking back' piece that speaks to the heart.
We must continue on making memories and dreaming.

Many blessings.....Jerry

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Thu, February 26th, 2009 7:00am

Many thanks for your kind comments Jerry, I guess as we get loder we have more time to look back! All the best Brian.

angellynn

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Thu, February 26th, 2009 6:36am

It did`nt go anywhere. It`s still there in your memories. Beautiful memories. Memories worth dreaming about. As long as there are memories, there will be dreams. I hear dreams do come true...

Brian, this is a lovely poem. I truly enjoyed it.
Please let me know when you post more.

Angellynn

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Thu, February 26th, 2009 6:57am

Many thanks for your kind comments Angellynn, all the best.

mum55

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Fri, April 17th, 2009 2:50pm

Hi Brian hope your well, what of memories...there treasures we must keep......lovely poem.......smiles and happiness to you Juliet

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Sat, April 18th, 2009 1:46am

Many thanks for your kind comments Juliet, hope you to are well and life is all it should be.

Vincey Delaney

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Mon, March 8th, 2010 7:00am

Oh, this is excellent, sad but very true to the word!!! You certainly can paint a vivid picture about the sadness of old age and being alone. Great work, two thumbs up!!!!

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Mon, March 8th, 2010 10:45am

Very kind of you to comment Vincey, many thanks