Broken by Brianna Lemaster

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is break up poetry. Well, more like depression poetry because the person I am depressed about in this poem isn't completely gone. The title was originally Broken, but apparently I cannot submit it with this given title.

Do you know how it feels to be broken?

Dropped and left for dead?

I know, and I can't stop feeling the feeling,

Swirling around my head.

My heart is shattered,

My mind a mess,

I feel so empty,

As you may have guessed.

I did too much wrong,

To be forgiven,

And too little right,

To be with him.

He's gone now...

And I am broken.

Submitted: February 17, 2015

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That was amazing... You captured a hell lot of emotions in just a few lines.The flow was great and the way you have written it... It is just so relatable. Great work, keep writing!

Mon, February 23rd, 2015 9:39am


Thank you, I am glad that you liked it haha

Mon, February 23rd, 2015 7:52am

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