Submitted: June 01, 2011
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Powerful! Just...powerful! Okay i'm using the same words here. How about this: I like this poem because I can feel the character (or you i don't know). The way it is being said is what intrigue me; it's like a slap in the face or some character showing who she is (it's a she, right? haha sometime I get mixed up). Good work!
Thu, June 2nd, 2011 8:46amOops an almost-erotic poem?
I love it... God give me at least a morsel of Sabrina's talent!
From your comment above, I see that this was an actual experience that you've had. I don't do those types of things but I won't judge you either.
Regarding the poem, I thought it was brilliant. The repitition of the words give it a audible sense of beat and suspense. It's very good. ^^
O I must saytha this poem blew my mind. It is very well written. You have great skill of the language. Very nice. :)
Tue, June 21st, 2011 4:17amFacebook Comments
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jacky franco
I love th this poem too ((:
Thu, June 2nd, 2011 3:57amAuthor
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thank you :)
Thu, June 2nd, 2011 9:35am