Death's Allure

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Death beckons

Lord Death met me at the end of my days

I tried to run, but he insisted I stay

He spoke of a peace that could make me feel whole

He beckoned me close and swallowed my soul


Submitted: March 05, 2012

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im not crazy im special

it looks like you red my stuff so i red some of yours as well :)

Mon, March 5th, 2012 1:04am

D0ntFeedTheM0dels

WHOA!! This is soo good!! It's sad but it's really good hunny!! This is like....WOW! Haha. KMU! xxJamile

Mon, March 5th, 2012 1:24am

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thanks love :)) i appreciate it

Sun, March 4th, 2012 6:11pm

Marcus Hanson

i can't think of anything else to say other than its eerie but awesome:)

Mon, March 5th, 2012 3:48am

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thank you ^.^

Sun, March 4th, 2012 8:14pm

Brian W

Very short but it still has a message....Keep writing :-)

Mon, March 5th, 2012 4:34am

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thanks so much :)

Mon, March 5th, 2012 5:15pm

Marcele Rose

short but gets its point across very well..i really like it!

Wed, March 7th, 2012 1:42pm

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thanks you!!

Wed, March 7th, 2012 3:19pm

Snowflake7

If I could like this a million times, I totally would (;

Thu, April 5th, 2012 5:35pm

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