Tiptoing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about past experiences and how they were overcome.

 Silent stares,

 

Feelings of disgust. 

 

Neither cares,

Still staying together is a must.

 

Lonely feelings of solitude,

longings for affection.

 

She has a bad attitude,

he goes everywhere but the right direction.

 

Sneaking sleepily around at night,

tiptoes on the floor and hugging walls so close.

 

Finding someone else in the the moon light,

feeling tears run down the sides of her nose. 

 

Forgiving one for doing wrong,

finding ever present love and compassion.

 

Coming back to him with love so strong,

realizing their love was more than just passion.


Submitted: June 22, 2012

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Brii Presley

I actually just put this up here. I was writing on another site and no one left me feed back... I started thinking that I must really suck at this. Thank you! I will give your work a read, have a great night.

Fri, June 22nd, 2012 7:18am

Persephone84

Beautiful! keep it up! cheers!

Mon, June 25th, 2012 12:21pm

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Thank you! I am working on another poem right now, just need to scribble out a little of my writer's block.

Mon, June 25th, 2012 10:32am

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