I wrote this to my girlfriend In her card that I gave to her on her birthday.

When I met you we were good friends, As time passed I didn't want it to end,

Everytime I saw you my eyes would glow red, From when I arose from sleep till I lye in bed,

When I looked into your eyes I knew it would be, Cause I get a rush of love that always thrills me,

When we snuggle on the bed, Thought of you rush through my head,

No matter what I do I can't stop thinking of you, Cause trying not to think of you is like telling the ocean not to be blue,

Today is your birthday, Hope I made it a special day,

Because without you I wouldn't know what to do, Because I love you and always will since the moment I met you,

Now I just wrote this poem to tell you I love you.


Submitted: March 15, 2011

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DeadlyNightshade

This one is sweet!!!! I like it a lot!
:)

Wed, April 27th, 2011 9:56pm

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:) thanks for the comments. An I did date quite alot but then I like found this person In some of my poetry, and together for two years then she just absolutely changed like couldn't even recognise her I had done nothing but I was the bad guy ??

Thu, April 28th, 2011 2:36am

DeadlyNightshade

Oh, I get that totally. One of my friends has relationships like that. He dates a girl and they're happy for a while(like super happy.**It kinda makes me sick to watch it, but yeah... you get my point**) But then the girl decides to change like a lot to impress him and he really doesn't know what to do at that point. (yeah, he's a mystery to me) So when he's not acting the "same," as they call it, suddenly he's the "bad guy" and they dump him.

Hmm...... I think that's happened to him like 3 times. Anyway, it's quite common here where I live.
*sigh* It's sad but true.

Thu, April 28th, 2011 9:27pm

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That's terrible eh I mean that what happened exacty to me but I submit going through divorce and bunch or other things you know lol.
U should meet me I'm nice to people :)

Thu, April 28th, 2011 3:25pm

DeadlyNightshade

Wish I could meet you, but unforunately... I live in the United States.
What I wouldn't give to live in the U.K. Haha! LOL!
I plan to move there one day and become as author or something... Maybe an artist if my talent's good enough.
:)

Fri, April 29th, 2011 2:21am

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Yeah I'm going to take an apprenticeship I'n cooking working a few weeks myself :) but I love writing just comes naturally and makes me feel proud sayin I do write poetry :) one of my passions

Thu, April 28th, 2011 7:45pm

krazed cidd

This is so sweet!! I get the feeling that when you write poetry you don't think..I'm guessing it just comes to you...right? Anyway, I absolutely positively love this! (I rarely say "Absolutely, Positively...:/) Anyway (yet again..lol!) this is really great!! X.x

Fri, April 29th, 2011 5:02pm

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yeah it does it just flows very easily I can honestly say I dont take more than 20 mins on a poem posably not even 10 I dont kno why ??? but I love getting comments on my poetry one of the few things im actually good at in life lol :)

Fri, April 29th, 2011 10:04am

krazed cidd

Well, your poetry is really great and I hope you get them published one day. I want a big book filled with your poetry!! :D lol! You are very good at writing, and when it flows instead of you thinking..then thats when you know how great it is. X.x

Fri, April 29th, 2011 9:22pm

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Thanks lol when i get a book.. hopefully, ill definitely let you know :) feel free to look at more poems :)

Fri, April 29th, 2011 2:56pm

kixx

best birthday card everrr !

Thu, March 1st, 2012 3:10am

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