A Shower that Feels Like Heaven

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This is an extremely short story that I wrote during my creative writing class. It is the prompt that we used to get our gears running one day.

Submitted: February 20, 2008

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Submitted: February 20, 2008



It was a cold, dark day when I was shoved into the dungeon that some of my friends warned me about. I had only been in the house for a few days when Jon decided to use me to stuff weird food like caviar into his mouth. I had always wondered when I would receive the torture, when Jon would decide that I hadn't done my job right. I guess it never occurred to me that my friends were only playing with me and that the dishwasher was a fun place to be.


Jon and his girlfriend had eaten off of me, and the shoved me under the warm water before leaving me in the silver pit for a few hours. I heard the clock chime three times before he came back to pick me up and put me into the plastic covered metal rack. I heard a loud hum as water began splashing down onto me. I was so afraid. The last thing I remember was getting a face full of suds.


I woke up thinking about the amazing shower that I had just had. It was the best time of my life. It was even better than the weird feeling of Jon's teeth scraping against my back! I started jumping everywhere as soon as Jon closed the silverware drawer.


“That was the best thing in the world!” I yelled to all my friends. “I want to go back.” There was a struggle as I raced to the top of the stack in the spoon section. I was triumphant. I just couldn't wait to be back in that dishwasher!

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