Silence of Sadness....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Breaking up was painfull especially when you were in love....

Tears began to fall from my face as the memories of him kept getting more and more vivid in my mind. My heart was aching, of so full of pain and hatred. I stayed silent for this was known as Silence of Saddness. My hair was falling onto my face to cover up the tears that fell. My heart was aching in sorrow. The whole that was in my heart was more full of darkness and hatetred then it was of love and passion. My smile turned into a frown when he said those two words. I can hear them still haunting me. Still...never ending; forever lasting!Those words...those words he said to me, "I love you,"still charm in my mind as Ibegin to wonder if he found someone better then me. These thoughts and more began to fill my mind...my mind. Those two little words that would break apart my world had been said and done. I lay here in tears, covering myself in shame, and shall never walk again, or love again, for this is Silence of Saddness.


Submitted: August 02, 2010

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MattiMayhem

I have felt like this before.. so i know exactly what you mean.. i noticed you make quite a few spelling mistakes (so do i i just go through obsessively trying to correct them all once im done) so if you want any help ill gladly skim through and correct them.. god that probably makes me sound really obnoxious :/ sorry xD anyway i love the poem, although it would be better if you split it up into a more poem type layout, it would help it flow a lot better. other than that it is very good and full of emotion so i see you have potential :) well done.

Much love, Matti xxxx

Thu, August 5th, 2010 3:15am

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Thank you so much MattiMyhem! Yeah I'm goanna start trying to check over my spellings a little more often than I do! But nah that doesn’t make you sound obnoxious in fact you sound like someone who is trying to help me and I greatly appreciate it. I do have a Microsoft Word pad now and I will be able to check my spelling errors now! If you don’t mind me by asking how old are you???

Thu, August 5th, 2010 5:18am

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