When you look me in the Eyes....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Heart breaks are horrible...

When you looked me in the eyes all I felt was love and compation. Everything we went threw, everything we said to eachother down to the moment to where we said "I love you." Hearing your voice saying my name was soundless and sweet. Extordanary love and compation for eachother. Everytime I would fall down you would be their to help me back up, you would be their before anyone else and I could depend onto you. My heart has gone black and cold and never again shall love come my way. Here your last words were "I'm sorry," and that was the end. The end of everything. The end of my world. You appear just like a dream to me. You would be their in my memorys and I always said...

I know you love me,

I know you care,

I know you always will be their for me,

Forever I thought we'd be together until those words came out that ended everything. Everything. I'm in peices now. He tried to steal you from me and his evil soul. But now the person I trusted has taken you away from me as well. At first I thought you were a fallen angel that was sent down here to help me, but now I relize love was just a myth to me. Now I sit here in tears and forver shall not love, you left me, left me hard, left me here crying and now my blood will run threw my vains in hatetred instead of love. Forever I shall stay here in tears and pain never to see you again.

Submitted: August 02, 2010

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compation. =compassion

threw was supposed to be through
Extordanary =extraordinary
vains =veins

Beside that it was nice!! :D

Tue, August 3rd, 2010 8:47am


lol thanks so much for the comment

Tue, August 3rd, 2010 2:04pm

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