The Haunted House

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This is about a young man's first trip to a haunted house.

Submitted: July 26, 2017

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Submitted: July 26, 2017



I have always loved the idea of a haunted house.  I have never been in one though however because I was afraid all the stories people had told me.  They would always tell me there were people in it that would actually murder you on the night of Halloween.  A few weeks later visiting this haunted house was going to become a scary reality. 

I was all set to go, my heart thumping quickly for I have been in a haunted house before.  I was excited and nervous at the same time.  I am really looking forward to this adventure in the house.

With the snap of a finger I was already there and out of the vehicle I was riding it.  I was so scared of what I saw: clowns, people dressing as scary things, axes and ropes.  This was definetelly the most terrifying scene I had ever seen.  

Walking towards the enterence I could hear the screams of adults and teens, cries of little babies outside waiting with other few parents that didn't want to go but their child wanted to.  I could feel the panic of the people on either side of me.  I was at the enterance and never got to see what was inside.

It was a small jounery but I awoke from the nightmare drenched in sweat, still afraid of what might have happened. I walked to the restroom and cleaned myself up then walked down to the kitchen and told my wife all about it. 

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