Fleeing into darkness
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Poem by: brokenwings07
You left me completly shattered
You forgot about what truly mattered
Partying and girls are only your temporary dedsire
It's not what we all require
Turning your back on someone you love
It will not bring you above
Right decision, you think it is
You'll notice it is as fake as showbiz
Being single is not a way of life
You'll most definatly be in a need of a wonderful wife
Whom you'll love and cherish
But you'll remember you left it all perish
Tears are running down my cheeks
I can no longer speak
I thought I was your everything
Instead you disappeared and you left me crying
I'm falling deep down in despair
I only wanted us to be a life long pair
No matter, I'll always be there for you
It will never change, to me you are my boo
Slowly, I see you pulling away
On my sides, I just want you to stay
Love you,I' ll always do
Take me in your arms one last time and tell me you do too.
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I like the poem, though there are areas that need correcting. Simple things, like "desire" instead of dedire ( I think that was just a typo. Things like that.
I've been here before, and it sucks. No matter how unlikely it seems, things have a way of working out.
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thank you for your support, (:
Very, very, sad. Your very expressive, and the poem sounds great.
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Thank you very much, it's very encouraging. I will definitely continue writing. :)
poetry is first and foremost about feeling (for me anyway) and in this piece I can feel my heart break as I read it not only the first time but every time it is beautiful thank you for sharing it with us.-Gibson
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You are so nice, thank you so much for your encouragement (:
I love your poetry =) it's so full of emotion and meaning, and your wording and sentence structure is brilliant. Well done =)
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thank you very much! it so encouraging to get such compliments on my work :)
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