Fleeing into darkness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The shadow that once was filled by your loved one..

You left me completly shattered

You forgot about what truly mattered

Partying and girls are only your temporary dedsire

It's not what we all require


Turning your back on someone you love

It will not bring you above

Right decision, you think it is

You'll notice it is as fake as showbiz


Being single is not a way of life

You'll most definatly be in a need of a wonderful wife

Whom you'll love and cherish

But you'll remember you left it all perish


Tears are running down my cheeks

I can no longer speak

I thought I was your everything

Instead you disappeared and you left me crying


I'm falling deep down in despair

I only wanted us to be a life long pair

No matter, I'll always be there for you

It will never change, to me you are my boo


Slowly, I see you pulling away

On my sides, I just want you to stay

Love you,I' ll always do

Take me in your arms one last time and tell me you do too.

Submitted: December 22, 2011

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Akyra Thalassa

Very, very, sad. Your very expressive, and the poem sounds great.

Thu, December 22nd, 2011 11:13pm


Thank you very much, it's very encouraging. I will definitely continue writing. :)

Fri, December 23rd, 2011 8:11pm


poetry is first and foremost about feeling (for me anyway) and in this piece I can feel my heart break as I read it not only the first time but every time it is beautiful thank you for sharing it with us.-Gibson

Sat, December 24th, 2011 8:21am


You are so nice, thank you so much for your encouragement (:

Sat, December 24th, 2011 6:53am


I love your poetry =) it's so full of emotion and meaning, and your wording and sentence structure is brilliant. Well done =)

Sun, June 2nd, 2013 3:42pm


thank you very much! it so encouraging to get such compliments on my work :)

Sun, June 2nd, 2013 9:29am

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