Things worth remembering.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this poem to someone i fell in love deeply with and have spent several years of my life with. Thank you for the wonderful memories you have created, i love you

Every day , I wonder

We’re we meant forever?

My heartbeat is still beating strong

By your side, I want to belong


Why have you decided to leave?

I see through your smile, you are afraid to grieve

It is more difficult than you had uttered

You are leaving yourself ruptured


I am longing for your protecting hold

This tingle, it will never grow old

I am seeking who I was once for you

Just to hear your murmur, I love you


Enveloping me is darkness

My surroundings have become loneliness

Knowing that the thunder hits after the rain

Will I ever make it through this pain?


I see you once again

Showing my heartbreak, I refrain

Your lips find a way to mine

Towards you, I recline


All my fears are vanished

For a few moments, my smile has been re-established

My tears have been forgotten

Because for a brief instant, it is me you wanted

Submitted: January 05, 2012

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Oh, very pretty....I am kind of awed by ur work...:) lol, my mouth is like dropped open. niceeeeeeeee. god, i love it.

Fri, January 6th, 2012 12:25am


Awe, that means so much! thank you :)

Thu, January 5th, 2012 4:33pm

Wu Lang

hi there,this poem is so well written.i can feel your love to him and your you long for the tingle feelings when he's around...don't you worry every things gonna be alright.just Pray.and yet time heals all

Fri, January 13th, 2012 7:36am


thank you very much. (:
Time does heal all wounds.. :)

Sat, January 21st, 2012 1:54pm


interesting poem

Wed, May 1st, 2013 1:17am


thank you :) I just came back to booksie, I missed the people out here! I will follow up to that poem shortly :)

Wed, May 1st, 2013 2:17am


thank you :) I think many of us have been through something similar!

Sun, June 2nd, 2013 4:31pm


Its a beautiful poem. You are right!

Fri, July 5th, 2013 1:45am

Reluctant Sage

Enjoyed reading your poem. It resonates past experiences. Nicely done.

Fri, July 5th, 2013 2:57pm


Thank you! It means alot to have so many great comments on this poem :)

Fri, July 5th, 2013 4:51pm

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