Soar With The Birds

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just my thoughts

Longing to leave this place...But no where to run...A life filled with uncertanties...I need somewhere to run

Escape this and just fly...That's it, I want to fly...Living amongst the birds and learning their praises...With no reason why

Just because they're happy...Because they're free...Not crying over love or life...Just living free

I wish I could soar with them...Flying above the clouds...Watching as the sun sets...Resting under the stars

But why...Why can't I do it...Why can't I spread my wings and fly?


Submitted: January 08, 2008

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gerabel

But that's exactly what we do as writers and why we are so fortunate... every time we create a story or poem, we spread our wings and fly!!!!! Nice work showing much promise. Keep up the good work, soaring like an eagle! Happy writing and reading.....Jerry

Tue, January 8th, 2008 2:53pm

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Lol Thank you! I'll be sure to soar like an eagle too! Happy writing and reading to you as well!

Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:38pm

mum55

Loved this so great being free....thats what makes poetry....Wonderfull words...Juliet

Tue, January 8th, 2008 3:50pm

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Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it!

Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:37pm

Svetlana

excellent work,I liked it ;-)
keep writing ;-)

Fri, April 4th, 2008 6:28pm

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Thank you very much! Be sure to read my other pieces and I'll do the same for you!

Fri, April 4th, 2008 1:07pm

air

Spead your wings and FLY!!!! :) just do it!!! (smiles)
Great Read Brown Skin! katie

Sat, April 5th, 2008 7:53pm

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Lol Thanks for commenting!!!

Sat, April 5th, 2008 6:09pm

nombies

Writing gives just that... Great escape! Fly away little soul until you find rest... Love your work

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 5:08am

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