how i tried to write a poem

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how i tried to write a poem

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how i tried to write a poem how i tried to write a poem

Poem by: brucek

Genre: Poetry

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Poem by: brucek

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Genre: Poetry

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attention all poets! i thought i'd share my process of writing a poem. this is only how i do it, and in this case i gave up. is the way you write a poem? i'm really curious.

Summary

attention all poets! i thought i'd share my process of writing a poem. this is only how i do it, and in this case i gave up. is the way you write a poem? i'm really curious.

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Submitted: January 09, 2012

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Submitted: January 09, 2012

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ATTENTION!!!!  THIS IS ONLY A FAILED ATTEMPT AT WRITING A POEM.  I WANTED TO SHARE HOW I TRY TO WRITE.  THIS IS, WORD FOR WORD, A  PAGE OUT OF MY NOTEBOOK.

 

You say you're lonely

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I'm so glad you're still looking for love

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Leave me alone, I want to die

The loneliness has swallowed me

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Leave me alone, I'm lonely

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I'm taking applications

For my next big surprise

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My world is spinning crazily

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If I give my heart to you

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And then what if I trust you,

My dearest future one?

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I keep digging tunnels

Into the echoes of my heart

I hear your whispers leaking

From where your loneliness is lost.

 

 

 


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