A dream remains a dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When i was at school level,i saw someone very beautiful and attractive and i dreamed of her everyday but unfortunately the school education came to completion and i wasn't able to reach her so...............

Great in the day nor bad in the night

A beauty that sparks through my sight

Begin wondering till the hope comes alive

That day will be the day of delight

 

 

The day you arrived didn't take so long

A dream that i thought of never went so wrong

But the hurdles collided under way between us

I tried and tried and tried prolong.


Submitted: August 14, 2011

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bs4179

Thnks jan thnks alot

Sun, August 14th, 2011 6:47pm

bs4179

thnks guys thnks a lot for supporting me as always.

Sun, August 14th, 2011 11:02pm

fresh spirits

Nice and Good luck with what you are going to write next:)

Mon, August 15th, 2011 6:18pm

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Thanks a lot for appreciating my work and thanks again for that good luck

Mon, August 22nd, 2011 10:39am

bs4179

Thanks a lot for commenting.It means a lot to me

Mon, August 15th, 2011 6:25pm

bs4179

Thanks a lot for your kind words.

Tue, August 16th, 2011 11:22am

greenallie2000

awww.... this is so sweet. i love your poems. :)

Thu, August 18th, 2011 8:12pm

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thanks for that kind and lovely comment,i really need it,,,,,,,,,:)

Thu, August 18th, 2011 1:40pm

bs4179

Thanks a lot once again for commenting.I really am thankful to you

Thu, August 18th, 2011 8:22pm

bs4179

Thanks a lot for liking it.

Thu, August 18th, 2011 9:53pm

siirdarkmaz

sweet poems. You rock.

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 12:58am

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Thanks a ton,,,,:)

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 3:40am

The moon & stars

Aww:)

Wed, August 24th, 2011 2:41am

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Thanks for all that,,,,,,:P

Wed, August 24th, 2011 4:01am

whytho

The title is very apt though it is not used in the actual poem. I liked how you portrayed your thoughts here. It's very beautiful! :)

Fri, September 2nd, 2011 12:45pm

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Thanks a lot,talkin about the title,i want to say that what i dreamed and what was real didn't come true that's why i have said a dream remains a dream and thanks alot for commenting,,,,:)

Fri, September 2nd, 2011 7:42am

Hira Amir

wOw....sweet

Tue, November 1st, 2011 10:04am

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Thanks a ton for liking it,,,,:)

Tue, November 1st, 2011 5:28am

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