Summer Time (:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Summer time (:

Summer is humid and hot
The time where most teenagers smoke pot
Summer is the chirping of crickets
And wasting your money on Phillies tickets
Summer is the frizzing of hair
The time you can go anywhere
Summer is the itching and scratching of mosquito bites
The time for fun, unforgettable nights
Summer is the swimming in pools
Where there is no rules and we can all act like fools
Summer is the scoping for hot guys
And the time to eat a billion French fries
Summer is the time to get tan
The time to drink out of beer cans
Summer is awesome
It’s the time that I blossom


Submitted: August 07, 2010

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littleliongirl

haha I loved it! I thought it was very funny and original, keep up the good work! ~Neno

Sat, August 7th, 2010 3:17pm

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thanks! (:

Sat, August 7th, 2010 8:40am

ThroughOpenedEyes

lmfao this is cool. And true. Almost sounds like what I do hahaha x] Cute, i like it alot :D

Sat, August 7th, 2010 3:53pm

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ahaha that is what i do and thanks (:

Sat, August 7th, 2010 8:54am

LOYAL SOUL

haah drink from beer cans *retches* gross beer :D i hate mosquitoes :P lol it's funny

Sat, August 7th, 2010 5:06pm

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thank you :D

Sat, August 7th, 2010 10:38am

cowboyslover

that is nice

Sat, August 7th, 2010 11:11pm

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why thank you (:

Sat, August 7th, 2010 4:21pm

fresh spirits

its a nice poem, it has a spirit. but if u visit mine yuo will discover your fresh spirit.

Sat, August 7th, 2010 11:19pm

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thankss, i think?

Sat, August 7th, 2010 4:21pm

FleeTard

OHH ME GODDD
i really like this, i love the last line.
Lovely

Sat, August 7th, 2010 11:23pm

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thank you!!!

Sat, August 7th, 2010 4:24pm

unknown girl

haha. I really liked it. It's really good:)

Sun, August 8th, 2010 7:25am

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thanks!

Sun, August 8th, 2010 2:15am

GiggleMonster2

I loved it! :0)
I love how you rhyme things!
I love poems that rhyme! It always catches my eye!
Great poem!
*GiggleMonster2*

Sun, August 8th, 2010 8:58am

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thank you, again :D

Sun, August 8th, 2010 2:16am

jk91

I like it, especially the last line, because it's fairly true for a lot of people, keep up the good work!

Sun, August 8th, 2010 2:27pm

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thanks (:

Sun, August 8th, 2010 7:31am

BoyMakesMeSmile

Hmm. Well I'm 13, so I don't drink OR do drugs, [not that people my age don't; I just don't] but other than that it's true. I like it! :D

Mon, August 9th, 2010 10:55am

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ahahaha thank you! and people that young should not be drinking, not that I'm older.

Mon, August 9th, 2010 4:18am

Harshal

Haha, this one is awesomely, wonderfully, naturally brilliant...

it's just plane but to the heart... the way summers are and want to be...

Keep writing
Harshal

Tue, August 10th, 2010 3:44pm

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why thank you

Tue, August 10th, 2010 1:47pm

XYZDraco56

Nice one, I liked this one a lot. You caught a lot of elements of summer and it's a clever piece of work. Good job. :D

Wed, August 11th, 2010 4:42pm

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thank you very much (:

Wed, August 11th, 2010 11:26am

danccheer read

Love it...great sense of humor!

Sun, August 15th, 2010 11:48pm

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(:

Mon, August 16th, 2010 3:01am

Mortimer Dalton

Ha, what a riot! could've done without the pot reference though, still it was funny. Please checkout my writings and please, please leave comments.

Tue, August 17th, 2010 5:49am

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Thanks! Will do (:

Tue, August 17th, 2010 5:35am

PurpleSkittles145

Grrr...i'm mad now...now i want summer much more now then before! lol, jk, this was awesome- i can't wait for summer

Sat, May 7th, 2011 3:06pm

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Aww thanks and same, I cannot wait for summer (:

Sat, May 7th, 2011 3:27pm

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