Hunger Tastes like Chocolate

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

About anorexia.


Don't want my bone to hide,
Lying under all the fat,
Bringing it to the surface,
Cutting out the crap.

So easy to deny,
Coz I don't deserve,
But I'm gonna be a,
Delicate bony curve.

No more peace,
Only worry when I eat,
The burning exercise,
But the rewards I reap.

Yes! More crying at the mirror,
Yes! More stepping on the scale,
Yes! More and more restriciton,
Yes! More feeling like a whale.
How lucky am I?

Nobody understands this,
They all think it's crazy,
But I'll get the last laugh,
How exactly is hazy.

I just want to be skinny,
Too many years of teasing,
Nothing I did was right.
Are my efforts finally pleasing?

But don't you worry,
Just please let me be,
Hunger tastes of chocolate,
So I won't be needing tea.


Submitted: December 04, 2006

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Mr Benn

Wow buddikins, you really seem to now your topic.I really felt this poem.

Mon, December 4th, 2006 9:13pm

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:D thanks

Tue, December 5th, 2006 12:22am

Eraser

excellent. the title pulled me in and the poem spoke of the pain of anorexia.

Mon, December 4th, 2006 9:24pm

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thanks

Tue, December 5th, 2006 12:23am

Dino

I really love your work. This poem is a wonderful look at the disorder from a point of view that is not often represented. And it is almost a determined tone, which I very much enjoy. Great work.

dino

Mon, January 22nd, 2007 11:44pm

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Cheers :D Glad you enjoyed it

Mon, January 22nd, 2007 9:00pm

rebel

This is incredibly moving and brings light to a common problem. Excellent way of portrayal. I enjoyed the hint of sarcasm and the way you wrote it.

Tue, January 23rd, 2007 6:10am

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Thankyou very much :D

Tue, January 23rd, 2007 6:34am

zephyrmail

you got that right--nobody understands even tho they may say they do-----do it for yourself--you are worth the effort...

Sat, January 27th, 2007 7:13pm

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Thankyou

Sun, January 28th, 2007 1:34am

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