Just for You

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This is a poem I'm attempting to write for a friend for Christmas..

Submitted: December 17, 2007

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Submitted: December 17, 2007



I’m so glad our paths crossed,
Like vines twisting closer with time,
And when I’m close to you,
I can see the whole world shine,
Ablaze with wonder and beauty,
You make the world new,
Moulding it with your laugh,
And so my love grew.
Because you make it all OK,
You’re an angel in disguise,
With a loving smile and face,
I finally feel safe, in your eyes.
I could take a life of pain,
For a second with you,
Just give me a smile,
Something to hold on to…
And I’ll make it.
My one wish upon a star,
Is for you to see,
You shine brighter than they do,
Full of such beauty.
But all I have to say is,
I love you, I love you,
That’s what it comes to;

I’ll always, always, love you.

 Please, please, please let me know what you thought; how it could be improved, how it made you feel, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Also.. if someone wrote this for you, would you appreciate it or not lol? The bit up there in italics is a bit I'm thinking of chopping.. if indeed I don't scrap the whole thing :) Thanks for reading

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