Open your eyes (to see the beauty insde)

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A poem i wrote when i was not in a great mood one night that kinda describes how people mess with you to their advantage and how it can leave you feeling.

Submitted: August 03, 2012

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Submitted: August 03, 2012



Open your eyes (to see the beauty insde)


I cant pass for stressed,

I’m damn outright depressed,

I try to seek comfort in a friend,

I believe they just pretend.


My life wont always be great,

But I leave it to fate,

And just when I try and seek love,

The bubble of lies shatters from above.


Your company made me happy,

Though my life was still crappy,

I know now that they all played pretend,

As I get down to my last true friend.


He might stick around and stay with me,

Or I might open my eyes and find emptiness staring back at me,

For mow I’m tired of walking around,

Sad. Alone. Without a sound.


At this point I start to think 17 years birth,

The bad thoughts that get you six feet under the earth,

Staring up into the night sky I see a prize,

Too much beauty to die, all you have to do is open your eyes.


In the end I’m still depressed,

But usually the answer that’s shown in front of you suits you best.

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