beautiful feilds

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is about looking into your imagination when things go bad, but you can never go out, because things never change.


the beautiful place among the feilds,

a place where dreams are made.

the place where all my worries sealed,

to go outside i am afraid.

the dreams inside my pure heart,

inside my imagination.

to know it will all fall apart,

i have lost all inspiration.

to be hurt and victimized,

i must be true to myself.

i know i must be civilized.

and stand up for ones self.

go to the place among the feilds,

where all your dreams are crushed.

the bitter anger being revealed,

inside the place where all dreams are flushed.


Submitted: September 20, 2009

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bunneyoh

all comments are appreciated so i can improve ;)

Sun, September 20th, 2009 5:39am

apocalypso

Gret poem Joseph but when has your EVER been pure.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 7:01am

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my heart is always pure, im just perfect in every single way!!!!

Sun, September 20th, 2009 4:46pm

Caitie

hahaha go calypso its emo

Mon, September 21st, 2009 1:25am

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haha its not emo! and im NOT a sookie! and i think its a good poem :P

Tue, September 29th, 2009 5:44am

Caitie

damn i feel bad now but it verry good!

Mon, September 21st, 2009 1:27am

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you SHOULD feel bad...you said some pretty mean things about my fantastically awesome emo poem

Thu, October 1st, 2009 3:55am

Caitie

i didnt know u could write poems no offence. Hahahaha sookie!

Mon, September 21st, 2009 1:29am

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im not sookie :'( waaaaah!
and i knew i could write poems, i dont like to be serious about things tho :P

Thu, October 1st, 2009 3:51am

Caitie

i readit again and its less emo now!

Mon, September 21st, 2009 1:34am

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gooooood :)

Thu, October 1st, 2009 3:49am

Chococat

so is this about u having to pee and you go to flushing medows?
i saw the news and do u really love calypso?

Mon, September 21st, 2009 5:57am

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your actually very funny cat :)

Tue, September 29th, 2009 5:43am

bunneyoh

no i dont cat :P, no its not about going to the toilet

Tue, September 29th, 2009 12:19pm

Escaping minds

cool but i have to say EMO!!! emo, emo, emo. Ok now i have that out of my system. that was really great since when could u write poetry?

Mon, November 9th, 2009 12:44am

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SINCE I DECIDED TO GO EMO!

Mon, November 9th, 2009 2:09am

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