Nightmare (working title)

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This is just an excerpt from a novel I'm writing. I'm writing in both the main character's POVs. It switches whenever it is appropriate for it to. I don't really want any bad comments or anything, I'm writing this mostly just for fun. But the character Dean is an older guy ( like early 20s; not really old..) and Riley is a 18 yr old girl. It sorta has this "Lolita" feel to it, but different. The only main similiarty would be its an older guy in love with an younger girl. But the part I'm putting in here is when Dean and Riley are alone together and a bunch of bad stuff has just happened (Dean killed his parents and his sister Casey, who is...or was Riley's best friend and he sorta kidnapped Riley) and thats why she kinda feels weird about the situation b/c she did love Dean but he has gone kinda crazy and doing anything (like killing people) to make sure they stay together forever. They maybe some grammatical/spelling mistakes but this is just the rough draft basically.

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Nightmare (working title)

Submitted: September 11, 2009

This is just an excerpt from a novel I'm writing. I'm writing in both the main character's POVs. It switches whenever it is appropriate for it to. I don't really want any bad comments or anything, I'm writing this mostly just for fun. But the character Dean is an older guy ( like early 20s; not really old..) and Riley is a 18 yr old girl. It sorta has this "Lolita" feel to it, but different. The only main similiarty would be its an older guy in love with an younger girl. But the part I'm putting in here is when Dean and Riley are alone together and a bunch of bad stuff has just happened (Dean killed his parents and his sister Casey, who is...or was Riley's best friend and he sorta kidnapped Riley) and thats why she kinda feels weird about the situation b/c she did love Dean but he has gone kinda crazy and doing anything (like killing people) to make sure they stay together forever. They maybe some grammatical/spelling mistakes but this is just the rough draft basically. Read Chapter