Not My Edward

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

another poem one of my fav's.

You Are NOT My Edward

You Aren't Perfect

You Don't Hold The Door For Me

You Don't Buy My Dinner

You Don't Say I Love You

You Don't Have Super Strength

You Don't Ask What I'm Thinking

You Don't Sparkle

But, You Are Perfect In My Eyes

You Don't Hold The Door Because You Are Too Busy Guiding Me Threw

You Don't Buy My Dinner Because You Make It For Me

You Don't Say I Love You Because You Say I Need You

You Don't Have Super Strength Because You Never Have To Worry About Hurting Me

You Don't Ask What I'm Thinking Because You Always Know

You Don't Sparkle Because You Know I'd Laugh

Your Perfect

You Are NOT My Edward

Because You Are YOU

You Are My Love


Submitted: September 13, 2009

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VirtuousWords

I loved it. Good Piece. I once was told by a wonderful poet that you can shorten sentences by taking out little words like are, and, so on. great work

Mon, September 14th, 2009 12:57am

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